Silent Giggles

snapdragons smile lips curl, mouths open when pinched silent giggles
Entry for Charles Henderson's haiku/senryu contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 5:32 PM
This was so cute, Diane. I'm sorry it wasn't in the winners' circle. The image is so adorable and my uncle taught me how to make the snapdragons open their mouths. Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Cool job Diane, Good luck. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 3:54 AM
Excellent haiku Diane. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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January 18, 2011 at 10:59 PM
Wow Diane, love this, good luck in contest. Not that you need it with this awesome entry. Harry
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January 18, 2011 at 9:23 PM
sooo charmed by this, diane... a fave of mine for the contest! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:08 PM
diane, I just saw your note to Elaine. Fewer than 15 is ok but not more than 15. I got this straight from the horse's(er, the judge's) mouth hahaha. Now we are all Good to GO!!! (well, I hope so anyway)
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January 18, 2011 at 8:02 PM
he he he! I have many of them,, enjoyed and good luck in the contest,..p.d.
George   Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:01 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Diane and thank you for your comment. I have amended mine. Lainie
Devonshire Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:35 PM
Exquisite! Wishing you luck in the contest, Diane! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Hey, I think you did very very well with this challenge, Diane, Best of luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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January 18, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Oh, Wow, Diane! This is such a delight vision of snapdragons! I love it! I just know it'll do well in the contest! Thanks for reading mine and the comments as well. Always, Annalise
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January 18, 2011 at 1:56 PM
Smile ~ "Yes," silent giggles -- Sounds almost as though a scene from "One Flew Over The CooCoos Nest!?" ~ Smile, now, where would that wicked Witch nurse Ratchet be, I wonder ~ Very pleasantly creative & humorous "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Diane Locksley!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Dear, Amid The Snapdragon Smiles of, 'Everlastings Beautiful Love;'" Bye!:) ~
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