Silent Fight

I keep an eye out,
for her to clue in.
Open to watching, instead 
preachy explanation.
But months have been lost,
to a standard doubled,
Because of my member.
Of course I question her words,
when chaos is pointed,
with me flinching.



(for Matt's contest was made in 45 seconds the phone rang, which ended it lol)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/15/2010 6:26:00 PM
No honor bestowed is misplaced ... all credit to the poet
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Date: 9/22/2009 1:16:00 PM
congratulations - this is wonderful.
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:18:00 PM
Johnathon, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/12/2009 7:13:00 AM
Dear Johanathon, congratulations of your well deserved win in matt's contest. Lainie
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations, Johnathon on your win in Matt's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations, Your very interesting “Write Now” poem is among the winners in Matt’s contest. You did at great job letting your thoughts flow, truly. Keep up the good writing. SMILES… Dane Ann
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Date: 8/30/2009 4:41:00 AM
Could go away with several interpertations here. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/19/2009 12:37:00 PM
this is a great piece and in such a short space of time well done!! thank you for your comments also love stacey
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Date: 8/16/2009 11:02:00 AM
This is amazing, great writing, I really enjoyed this, especially written in such little time. Good luck in the contest! Thanks for your comment on my piece. Blessings ~Michaela~
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Date: 8/16/2009 11:00:00 AM
Very intriguing, Johnathon! I hope it was the woman in question on the phone and that the chaos has ended. You have an incredible description of anxiety here! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/16/2009 10:59:00 AM
brilliant,excellent write--charma
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Date: 8/16/2009 8:56:00 AM
very good poem keep up the great work' Robert Ball.
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