Silent Fight

I keep an eye out,
for her to clue in.
Open to watching, instead 
preachy explanation.
But months have been lost,
to a standard doubled,
Because of my member.
Of course I question her words,
when chaos is pointed,
with me flinching.



(for Matt's contest was made in 45 seconds the phone rang, which ended it lol)
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Shango Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 6:26 PM
No honor bestowed is misplaced ... all credit to the poet
Joseph Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 1:16 PM
congratulations - this is wonderful.
Moreno Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Johnathon, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
George   Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 7:13 AM
Dear Johanathon, congratulations of your well deserved win in matt's contest. Lainie
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations, Johnathon on your win in Matt's contest. Love, Carol
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations, Your very interesting “Write Now” poem is among the winners in Matt’s contest. You did at great job letting your thoughts flow, truly. Keep up the good writing. SMILES… Dane Ann
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 4:41 AM
Could go away with several interpertations here. Keep writing. Sara
Trolan Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 12:37 PM
this is a great piece and in such a short space of time well done!! thank you for your comments also love stacey
Payne Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 11:02 AM
This is amazing, great writing, I really enjoyed this, especially written in such little time. Good luck in the contest! Thanks for your comment on my piece. Blessings ~Michaela~
Devonshire Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Very intriguing, Johnathon! I hope it was the woman in question on the phone and that the chaos has ended. You have an incredible description of anxiety here! Love, Carolyn
Chircop Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 10:59 AM
brilliant,excellent write--charma
Ball Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 8:56 AM
very good poem keep up the great work' Robert Ball.
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