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Silent Echoes of Her Tongue

It's always those who reside in our hearts,
whose words, like lightning,
electrocute our soul,

and in each pain there is a lesson.

Her life was like a room without a view,
those 'rainy day' eyes, 
could have formed a deep river,
but no ship sailed upon it,
to carry me to her

and I would have kissed away every tear.

Misplaced, I could feel her yearning,
for a home, she had never known,
confused and lost, but her silence,
left her trapped in burdensome meadows, 

and I wonder if I could have shown her the way.

From the silent echoes of her tongue,
I could feel the malady of her spirit,
feel the lacerations piercing her heart.
If only my words could have soothed her,

but even they could not save her.

As the lights dimmed, 
silent stars became the nature of my poetry,
I asked the moon why?
but clouds covered his expression.

Now my mind is a time machine 
of her memories, her voice still haunts,
as I ponder if the thunder will persist,
because I'm too afraid to close my eyes.

Simple Musing
Silent One
4 October 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Looking back, maybe with a slight feeling of guilt. Beautiful! ~ Sending you sincere Christmas greetings and all the best for 2019. // paul
Barden Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 5:49 PM
Very nice ... some lovely imagery here, and woven like a lyrical epic ... enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing.
Duet Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 8:33 PM
This is so beautiful, Z. Your empathy shines through this wonderful poem. You never disappoint me. FAVED of course. You're still #1 in my book. Hugs....
Steward Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 9:05 PM
This is one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read. These words allow me to relate on quite a personal level. Lovely talent you hold.
Dutta Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 11:12 PM
Beauty n charm from a truly talented poet. Blessing.
White Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Dream catcher stargazer moonwalked I follow your floating footsteps in the vast expanse called space but gravity is the monster that propels objects apart. So
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Silent One, You are displaying a deep pain that transcends words, overflows a heart and disables a mind! A powerful imagery and a wonderful rendition! to my fave. list. Shine in the beauty of silence.. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
Teagan Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 11:56 PM
I am just in awe of this, it literally brought tears to my eyes. You know, you always were a very good writer, but I truly think you have improved so much over the past months. This is beautiful.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Sparkling introspection, SO!! Your thoughts shine w/cerebral intensity and visceral empathy. Your nitro ink moves the creative needle of my time machine. Ty for the muse burst of elevation. A great poem on so many levels. Love and more love always, brother.
Marine Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Painfully poignant....I think this is one of your best...all the insecurity in longing so lovingly expressed...A fav.
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:13 PM
The echoes of her tongue, something I am quite familiar with. Awesome SO...great stuff...Charlie
Papyrus Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 2:22 PM
I don't know how you manufacture so much brilliant wording. YOU are an amazing artist to read!!
Sheehan Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Excellent write. Very creative and insightful. Great pen.
Wanter Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Your "musing" is not so simple. You have such a grip on emotions. So enjoyed this.
Lindley Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 8:21 AM
As always , truly brilliant and heartfelt poetry regardless of the form used my friend. A fav... Sending you a pm too
Neumann Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Wow. 'Tears forming a river with no ships'. But when we do not close our eyes, the cornea dries out and we cannot see any longer. Which actually (as you might allude to) can be less painful. Thank you for posting this poem.
Man Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Silent One.. you write with a beautiful and creative pen. You create a scene where you control the emotions of every reader who enters into your haunting story!
Kiser Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 7:43 AM
A beautiful pen; a couple of my favorite verses: "could have formed a deep river, but no ship sailed upon it, to carry me to her" This is such great imagery. "I asked the moon why? but clouds covered his expression." This is wonderful!
Hagy Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 10:58 PM
So beautifully haunting...silent memories...they tear us apart and keep us going :) Bravo Silent, have a great day :)
Horsman Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Love your profound and inspiring poem ,SO, It is truly moving....
Ashley Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Silent One, your breathtaking and sadly beautiful poem is emotionally haunting and tragically evocative. Metaphoric beauty and heartache is expressed with your smooth poetic flow like a deep poignant river my friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Goff Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 6:00 PM
This poem rushed like a river over a waterfall, nicely done!
Raven Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Hi Silent, you use free verse to its full extent. I have always believe that free verse gives a poet more scope in whatever they do. You use this scope to its full extent, and sometimes beyond. There is always something of interest within your work. Your words hold the reader within your thoughts easily, they paint such vivid visions, playing with the emotions of the reader. You are indeed a wordsmith. This is another excellent piece. Have a wonderful end to Saturday. Your friend always...Mike.
Salehi Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 3:23 AM
Your words electrocute my soul...
One Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Electrifying....
Nicole Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Sometimes, the echo of silence is very loud- it is like thunder, a sound that cannot be hushed. Your thoughts hold depth and pain, longing as well. Power behind every word, as the heart is placed upon the page. Very emotional. ~ Brandy
One Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Brandy....
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