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Silent Code

Stillness envelops me now Wishing I could hear your whispers But mortar shells rattled my ears From air raids on the battle front Constant blasts pierce anvil and hammer Leaving me deafened through echoes of night. My return leaves you waiting among flowers Allaying fears and speaking through warm eyes I go damn , damn to those who harken your calls Like sweet pitch of birdsongs playing on those lips Whipping gently on my furrowed chest As my heart listens to the tap of your touch. And the swish, rumble , purr of your skirt Cascade with the usual morning breeze Remembering how we moaned on our first kiss Where l howled at evening’s sweet chorale Now, we lay on the sheets of moonlit grass But the silent code between us wakes me up. P.D's Contest: Free Verse Old/New by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/21/2013 12:53:00 PM
Always full of luscious imagery. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/21/2013 9:31:00 AM
Nette an outstanding beautiful romantic win..congratulations
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:29:00 AM
Many congratulations on another win nette, well done xx
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:50:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations!! A nice winning poem... Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 12:30:00 PM
Interesting take on the contest..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:25:00 AM
Big congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/16/2013 10:25:00 PM
It's an excellent beauty of beautiful heart. Sound is such that it sounds without sound. Wish you good luck in the contest. Lovely done my friend. Thanks.....,loved always, bl
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Date: 5/16/2013 4:19:00 PM
I've just been taken through a journey without sound. For I've allowed your words to speak, in my mind they now abound. Images, my they speak, in love during a war. The more one reads, the more my mind explores. <*> It was a joy to read you again Princess, your King widely smiles <*> x
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Date: 5/12/2013 5:43:00 PM
Frank will certainly hear you with this incredible write my friend! You have written an illustrious and ingenious of a poem! You write with such passion, so much so that I can feel what you are saying! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous piece this evening, such a delightful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/12/2013 11:16:00 AM
Eloquent writing, Nette, as is your wont. Good to have you back. My very best of luck to you in Frank's contest. Licia :-)
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