Silence of Rio Secreto

simply in safe space waist-high water silence and blindness i owned the minute lift of lilting quiet 9/21/2020

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V. Deepa

Date: 9/22/2020 11:48:00 AM

Peaceful scene..that would be a wonderful experience..kind off adventurous one.;-) I believe your doing well.Have a great day dear Kim mam:-)Much love sent to you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2020 4:47:00 PM

Love this kind of adventure!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2020 9:15:00 AM

dipping or floating on blue waters can be serene, kim...embrace the moment...huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2020 11:53:00 AM

It was wonderful! Need some more of these times!

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/21/2020 7:02:00 AM

A safe, appealing space, to pause while comfortably buoyant...seems little, and reasonable enough to ask for every now and then. Love it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2020 11:52:00 AM

Yes it does!

Silent One

Date: 9/21/2020 6:16:00 AM

Hmm... What is this one about?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2020 11:51:00 AM

They brought a small group of us into the secret caverns. We turned our miner’s lamps off and had a unique experience. I was in my element. <3

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/21/2020 6:16:00 AM

Have you been to Mexico? Rio Secreto is deemed to be picturesque. ~~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2020 11:52:00 AM

Yes and it’s beautiful!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/21/2020 5:37:00 AM

Elevation comes in the most secret time, lift on quiet times, salute dear Kim alkas poetry

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2020 11:52:00 AM

Yes! Thank you!