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Silence Is a Fire


                                                 silence
                                                is a fire

                            able to accommodate
                             romantic evenings ~
                         or burn down the home


[septolet]

written 7 Oct 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Horne Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 11:57 AM
yes, such perception here!
Watt Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 11:52 PM
Thanks, Jack!
Faulkner Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 7:20 PM
I'm so happy to see this gem on the winner's list, many congrats, John!
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thank you for sharing the joy, Michelle!
Proxenos Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 9:17 AM
Your imagery is always phenomenal John, you are truly gifted and your short forms of poetry are always so creative a PPP (picture perfect poem) about a fire. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Jenn, your supportive words mean a lot to me as I was just telling a friend I feel insecure in the short forms. But I am learning so much from reading the creations of my many gifted friends here at Soup. I am always grateful for your kind and thoughtful words my friend. Hugs ~ John
La France Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 6:47 AM
John, great image and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this wonderful poem _Constance
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Constance, thank you for the contest and the confidence boost of your placement and kind words. ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 5:41 PM
congrats, and keep trying the short forms. You will become a pro
Watt Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 10:39 PM
You are a kind and encouraging mentor.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 1:18 PM
- Be careful with the fire - Congratulations on your win, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 2:15 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Congratulations for your 1st place with Silence After the Storm. Enjoy your day ~ John
Crabtree Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:00 PM
You paint a perfect picture with your words about fire. I've never seen it written any better than this! Straight to the point. :) ~ Angie
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Kind words from you, my friend! I am grateful for your generous comment. Enjoy your day ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 6:32 PM
very different for you, John. And I see you put most of the words on the bottom part. Creatively styled! Totally different from mine. I LOVE the popcorn in the picture!!
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:48 PM
Yes, quite different. As I've mentioned, I feel insecure with these shorter writes. Thanks for the encouraging words, my friend. Maybe the picture will help me in the contest, haha!
Bayles Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 3:52 PM
John, I like this poem.
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Thank you for letting me know, Mike. Enjoy your day.
One Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:24 AM
Silence is involved in everything, even passion and fire... nice one John.
Watt Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Thank you very much, SO.
Nicole Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 7:49 PM
Romantic moments shared indeed. Oh my !! Except when that fire burns the house down. Your thoughts bring a smile and create a beautiful mood, all at the same time. :) Your pen is on Fire !!! :) Brandy
Nicole Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 8:57 PM
So true. Silence is a Fire, depending on the moment. Thank you John. This photo was taken yesterday. I appreciate your compliment. :) Brandy
Watt Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 8:48 PM
This one goes both way, I've known silence that brings a warm smile and silence that is a dagger to the heart. Grateful for your wonderful comment and I enjoy the new avatar!
Faulkner Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 7:32 PM
I like the contrast of warmth and comfort, and the danger it also contains, that's why it's called playing with fire, I guess, hoping for a good placement in the contest for you!
Watt Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 7:47 PM
With only 14 words I tried to choose a metaphor that's well known for going both ways. I'm glad you picked up on that. Thank you for all the wonderful comments tonight, Michelle.
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