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Silence In Your Voice

Silence in your voice After the episode of wistful romance You called to say sorry but you just gasped And all I heard was unfamiliar parlance. On the periphery of unintelligible noise You spoke eloquently of a beautiful evening As it lingered through our candle-light dinner, Looking for a dialogue of romantic endeavor When you alluded to virtues ardent love cares And once again I let you seduce my desires. Then you heard the call of an unknown rival, Embraced with me but embroiled in her dream Sunken in anguish of sudden sweat and fear. In your tidings I heard more than you spoke As tone of your voice made obscure sound You heard my question but didn't respond. I got my answer when you wheezed for air Though you didn't say it, I heard your sigh Silence in your voice was loud and clear. December 20, 2017

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Date: 12/21/2017 8:40:00 PM
I read this the second time and then realised that it was a woman's lament. Excellent and you captured the agony so well, brilliant as always Vijay...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/22/2017 6:58:00 AM
Many thanks Maria..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 12/21/2017 8:10:00 AM
Love can hurt Vijay, especially those who do not know how to love... Well expressed..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/21/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 12/20/2017 7:23:00 PM
If you had listened carefully you would have heard, the eyes, nose, hands, and ears would have told...I enjoyed your poem Vijay... Take care, my friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/21/2017 7:05:00 AM
So true my friend--appreciate your comments..thank you!
Date: 12/20/2017 6:30:00 PM
Oooh! How chilling to hear that "silence." I enjoyed this poem very much.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/21/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thank you SW--appreciate your comments.

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