Jenny Lu Poet Free verse

Silence

Silence filled the room
The clock goes tick-tock
tick-tock
No life is breathing
slowly, slowly
The horror fills the silence
glaring, glaring
It's too late now
shattering. shattering.
The silence that fills us all
walking, walking
High heels clicking
The click on the doorknob
Shaking, shaking
The foor opens, in comes
a person, a head
The eyes are staring
Silence, Silence.

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Rhia Madison Thomer October 31, 2010 at 4:25 AM a very intense write but very much enjoyable i was particularly fond of the ending. congratulations on your feature this week. --Madison

Carol Sunshine Brown October 25, 2010 at 11:56 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Jenny. Love, Carol

Derrick Burton June 1, 2010 at 5:08 PM enjoyed this interesting write here and have a wonderful day.:)

Carol Sunshine Brown January 14, 2010 at 5:41 AM I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Jenny. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Eleanore Bourner January 13, 2010 at 4:43 PM great suspense here! keep writing so well ------Ell