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Silence

Alone, he sits alone surrounded by heather and moss and stone and all the world he wishes to disown Empty, he lies empty surrounded by meaningless possessions of plenty and all the world reinforcing his disillusioned twenties Hide, he crouches and hides surrounded by a love that has already died and all the world he cannot abide Care, he stands without a care surrounded by a wilderness barren and bare and all the world he has no wish to share And all this time he shuffles around his ears alert for that silent sound his eyes alive for a loneliness found his touch straining for emptiness to surround

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/29/2009 4:00:00 AM
Lonely, lonely write Gareth. The work thats posted on the Soup is incredible. So positive it leaves the reader wondering if it's someones life thay are reading or some awesome clever writing. If this is based on fact it's rather dark and sad, and i hope a light shines soon. The Highlander>>James
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Date: 8/11/2009 10:59:00 AM
Incredible use of ryhme Gareth and a great poem strong lines and strong title. you have set the bar high with this poem and I mean that great work keep writting.
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:01:00 PM
This is a poem that most people with find a part to resonate in ... your describing many different kinds of loneliness and you do it with a clarity thats amazing .. Love Jayne x x
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Date: 8/8/2009 1:54:00 PM
"and all the world he wishes to disown"...why do I understand this sooo well? I know that feeling. A very lost poem...."and all the world he has no wish to share"...."touch straining".....I don't know, but my heart is wrenched because of that. Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:15:00 AM
Thrilling yet rhyming beatifully.
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Date: 8/8/2009 7:27:00 AM
Deep feeling expressed here. Keep writing. Sara
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