Silence

It was neither empty nor hollow
Why was it named thus I never knew

Enchanting midnights 
Hopeful dreams
Unspoken solace
Hushed screams
Haunting fears 
Lost places
Unremoved scars
Undefeated battles
Nostalgic innocence
Regained spirit
Undying faith
Lonely victories
Joyous defeats
Whispered lullabies
Cocooned love

Saw everything
Remained with everyone
Who named it silence?

May 13, 2020
BRIAN'S CHOICE B,any form,any theme Contest
~Winner: First Place

Your best free verse 2020 Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
~Winner: Third Place

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Date: 5/29/2020 2:23:00 PM
There is darkness and beauty in the many shades of silence you've so thoughtfully and emotionally expressed, Aditi. A potent yet delicate piece of pensive depth. Congratulations on your excellent win in John's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/29/2020 2:39:00 PM
I am glad you loved my words. Thank you for your kind appreciation and wishes. God bless you Susan :)
Date: 5/26/2020 6:45:00 PM
Aditi, I would love to hear your thoughts about a poem of mine on this subject: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/truth_in_silence_1240120. Thank you for your kind visits and words ~ John
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:14:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this one with me. I am glad I get to read your words John :)
Date: 5/25/2020 9:14:00 PM
Congratulations for this win, Aditi. So nice to see you gain more readers and more acknowledgement for your excellent poetry!
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Date: 5/26/2020 9:24:00 AM
Thank you once again for your kind words of support and appreciation John! Your words always encourage me :)
Date: 5/25/2020 8:12:00 PM
So little said, yet strong ..yes Aditi, silence indeed is a powerful tool.. congratulations on your creative pieces winning appreciation
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Date: 5/26/2020 9:23:00 AM
I am glad you loved it Debjani. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation :)
Date: 5/25/2020 7:31:00 PM
Congrats Aditi on an excellent entry, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 5/26/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for the appreciation and for placing me in your contest John :)
Date: 5/15/2020 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations! Unique and thoughtful poem! Best wishes.
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Date: 5/15/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating Malabika :)
Date: 5/14/2020 12:18:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS for continuous TOP ranking. Blessing
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you for your blessings :)
Date: 5/14/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thrilled again to see you in the first place in Brian's contest. Congrats, Aditi.
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Date: 5/14/2020 7:42:00 AM
Blessed by your kind appreciation Vijay :)
Date: 5/14/2020 2:30:00 AM
Excellent poetry my friend...Congrats!! on POTD!! and on the win, Aditi...welcome to the soup my friend...best wishes from the Wingster :o)
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Date: 5/14/2020 2:37:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for your wishes and encouragement :)
Date: 5/14/2020 1:45:00 AM
Congratulations On your First place Win Bravo!
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Date: 5/14/2020 2:05:00 AM
Thanks so much for your blessing :)
Date: 5/14/2020 1:34:00 AM
A very lovely and unique poem deserving of your First Place Aditi. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 5/14/2020 1:36:00 AM
Thank you Connie for your appreciation. :)
Date: 5/13/2020 9:00:00 PM
"Listen to silence. It has so much to say" - Rumi. You have gone very deep with this one, Aditi. So many poignant and thoughtful examples of silence, both pleasant and terrifying. Excellent writing, my friend. I look forward to reading more ~ John
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Date: 5/13/2020 10:24:00 PM
I am so blessed for this deep understanding of yours for this one. Thank you so much for your appreciation and wishes John. :)
Date: 5/13/2020 4:14:00 PM
This is very clever and original. You have the gift to make your point succinctly. Kudos, Aditi.
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Date: 5/13/2020 10:21:00 PM
You are always gracious with your reviews Vijay. Gratitude and blessings. Thank you :)
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