Silence

I sit in silence in a dim lit mood,
while into the darkness I cast my stare.
The rain tapping on my window intrudes,
upon such a night too lonely to share.

My thoughts then turn to the passing of time,
memories hidden in forgotten tears.
Catching small glimpses of moments sublime,
as faces and places bookmark the years.

Pondering the past becomes an escape,
from the prison of the day to day grind.
Pleasant old memories will soon reshape,
when altered by a half-truth telling mind.

As I sit in quiet darkness alone,
I wonder who else the silence has drawn.





2/19/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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October 11, 2019 at 6:18 PM
half truth telling... I love that line. This was a wonderful poem. You are and excellent poet. Ann
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October 16, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Thank you Ann! Have a wonderful day my friend!
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September 12, 2019 at 5:04 AM
I am digging this. Matches the feeling a get sometimes. Nice work!!
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September 12, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Thank you Michelo! Have wonderful evening my friend!
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September 11, 2019 at 4:45 AM
As I sit in quiet darkness alone, I wonder who else the silence has drawn. ...AUTHENTIC
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September 12, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Thank you Lyn!
Marc Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 10:22 PM
Very nice Wren
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March 22, 2019 at 6:42 AM
Thank you P.M. Have a blessed day!
Khan Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 12:37 PM
Well written
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March 5, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Hello Wren Rushing, silence is a peaceful place to ponder. A place to think things out for writing poetry. have a nice day my friend.
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March 20, 2019 at 1:44 PM
And I do enjoy hearing from you. Have a nice day my friend.
Rushing Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Thank you Darlene, I always enjoy hearing from you my dear friend!
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March 1, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Bravo, Wren. Beautifully written. Congrats on your win.
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March 1, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Thank you Line!
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March 1, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Back with congrats!!! Love this poem :)
Rushing Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Thank you P.S.!
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February 20, 2019 at 9:54 AM
when altered by a half-truth telling mind. ---so much to love in this deep, sad piece. This is a diamond. An absolute FAV for me! Well done dear poet! <3
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February 20, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Thank you P.S. your kind comments are always welcomed. God bless you and your family!
Sands Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 7:17 AM
Very well written. It shows how pleasant some memories from the past can be to think about :)
Rushing Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 2:37 PM
Heidi thank you so much for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day my friend!
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February 20, 2019 at 6:54 AM
been there, done - and still do---that. Nicely written Wren. especially like "as faces and places bookmark the years"
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February 20, 2019 at 2:35 PM
Thank you John!
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