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Silence

in our world of noise ~
soothing music for our soul
the sound of silence  ~


Inspired by Niall Fulhams poem, Whispers Of Silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 4:55 AM
Agree with you cent percent !Sometimes silence is more musical ! Lovely senryu !
Cunningham Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 7:23 AM
Thank you Valsa, as you get older you appreciate silence more. Tom
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:33 AM
A nice Senryu Tom, such a lot said in so few words. You are a Master at this....Maria
Cunningham Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Maria, enjoy doing them, have to tweak a lot to get it just right. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Yes, and so soothing it's even been sung about.
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 9:01 PM
And a beautiful song too Andrea. Tom
Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Amen to that.
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 10:26 AM
Sadly in our noisy world we don't get enough sometimes.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Hello Tom, the sound of noise can be over whelming, so the quiet is what we seek. For me when the noise is too much, and there is no water view to seek, I play my music tape that has the water sound to relax me. have a nice day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Thank you Darlene, Quiet is welcoming but so is the sound of water too, it does have that calming effect. Tom
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:34 AM
- I love the silence ... especially in nature, Tom - A lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:07 AM
Thank you Sunshine, there is no better tonic for the soul. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 4:39 PM
We all need to “hear” the silence. Nice, Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:23 AM
Indeed we do Kim, Thank you. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Heavenly my friend, Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thank you Demetrios, Tom
Roper Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Wonderful verse, Tom.. the older I get the more I treasure silence or the sounds of nature. Hugs Eve
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:30 PM
I know what you mean Eve, years ago noise didn't bother me, took my two grandsons to a play centre for children, you can imagine the noise they generated lol. But the sounds of nature of say a babbling brook or a waterfall are much more welcoming. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Sometimes silence is good but sometimes is not what we want to hear. Your work is very thought provoking and I am glad that I chose it to read today. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:24 PM
I know what you mean Sara, a world without sound would be indeed a lonely one but occasionly the peace it brings us can be very uplifting. Tom
Lawless Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 10:58 AM
let us first define 'MUSIC'.....
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Defining music can sometimes be difficult because what is classed as music in some cultures may not be shared by other cultures. Then of course there is what you would call silent music, John Cage, Korn and even John Lennon have composed pieces with no sound which is what I'm referring to in the senryu , the golden sound of silence. Tom
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April 2, 2018 at 10:53 AM
that is so, so true, Tom. If I don't get silence and solitude, I feel off balance. Well said in so few words.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Agnes, sometimes the peace it brings can be very welcoming. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Tom, did you once teach? I feel so sorry for the children who get out of cars that are blasting utter noise into their little brains at break-neck levels.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 9:34 AM
No I wasn't a teacher Caren, I know what you mean hearing them driving by, you can feel the vibration as they pass and your right utter noise. God knows what they are doing to their hearing. Tom.
Sands Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:28 AM
So true. Very nice Senryu :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Thank you Heidi. Glad you liked it. Tom
Allison Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:19 AM
lovely senryu I too love silence, I agree it's music to the soul:-) Niall's poem was truly inspirational:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Jan, no better sound. When I read Nialls poem I got this beautiful image of sitting on a jetty by a lake and not a sound. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Beautiful and succinct. Lovely, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Thank you very much Line, Sadly the world has become a very noisy place. Tom
One Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:47 AM
shhhhhhhhh......... You know I love me a bit of silence lol
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:16 AM
Thanks S.O. ,I'm trying to type this quietly lol
Karmakar Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:45 AM
Oh! nice quote. Good luck, my dear poet.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Thank you Sanjay, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
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