Signs of Love

bull
and crab
taurean
and cancer sign
was the death of our affair in the stars?

was our successful marriage in the stars?
Piscean and
taurean
fish and
bull

For Nette's Zodiac contest
Jack Horne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Greenlee Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 7:04 AM
Very nice.Truly imaginative.Much luck to you in this contest.Thanks again for your comments.Good day to you.....sincerely
Devonshire Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 4:06 PM
Hmm... well, a bull could eat either the fish or the crab and crabs are used as bait for some fish. In any case, the poor crab loses out in love. Maybe that's my problem, Jack, I'm a "crab" sign. Witty tetractys. You gave me a great laugh. Thanks. Best wishes in the zodiac contest! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Funny, so much for love Astrology, best of luck in nette's contest, Jack I read your co-write example for your contest, It is just wonderful really you did a fantastic job, very inspiring, I would love to enter . . . but ~~
Brown Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 6:04 AM
I am enjoying reading some very excellent poetry this morning. Glad to see you have something posted today it was a pleasure to read your poetry. I hope you have an awesome inspiration filled weekend Jack. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 11:56 PM
I guess this fishy better find a bully then. Oh I mean a bull :D... very interesting tetractys here Jack... ok so you are Taurus??? Oh shucks, another fish beat me to you! heehee kidding :) lucky fish! Enjoyed your tetractys Jack :) wish you the best in Nette's contest :D
Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 8:34 PM
ooh, cool cool poem. I take it you had a first and she was cancer? I am married to one of those. They are sweet but very moody.I am Virgo with Taurus moon and a fortune book told me I should have married a Taurus. Woe is me. hahahaha.
Foulk Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 8:11 PM
i am not into signs, but really liked this piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on Brandy got groomed, she had a lot of hair taken off, and everytime she gets her hair cut, she seems to think that it is ok to get up on the furniture. any other time she stays off.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 6:06 PM
very interesting Jack to us this form for Nette ..super dynamite explanation of the four signs here luv.. good luck in the contest.. u have a wide range of talent my friend.. and isn't it true ..once u try the Tetractys form it haunts u to keep writing in it luv..?
Mehta Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 1:49 PM
hahahah, witty and humorous predictions, jack
Long Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 1:33 PM
I love it! cory
A   Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 1:23 PM
a lovely write, enjoyed,..p.d.
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