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signs of autumn

radiant light glows
leaves afloat on hidden strings~
 curtain raised on fall

trees of autumn leaves
a sudden shedding of gold~
encore for beauty

dark branches are bare
naked and cold they rattle~
final act is snow

Copyright © Suzanne Delaney | Year Posted 2024

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Jim Slaughter Date: 8/8/2025 10:11:00 AM I love the pic, Suzanne...and the haiku are equally gorgeous. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 1/4/2025 11:43:00 AM Hello loved the scene/theme suZ..' hope you are All well and maybe you smiled at my last comment? Got to touch base i feel sometimes.' I need to touch the spirit that you will know.) Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 1/23/2025 6:21:00 AM Hi Joe: Sorry I missed replying to this great comment. You know I have been dealing with a life turned upside down by Hurricane Helene. I hope all is well in your world dear friend. SuZ

Gary Radice Date: 10/19/2024 4:34:00 PM Love how you lift the curtain on Mother Nature's theatre. Your clever wordplay deserves a mention too. "Curtain raised on fall" Cheers - Gary Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/13/2024 5:30:00 AM Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Autumn is now upon us and the beauty is always new and fresh to me. Thanks for sharing your talent. Sara K Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/9/2024 10:50:00 PM Back with my congrats on your fantastic poetry win. Are you ok right now? The news about the hurricane looks scary. You are in Florida, right? Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/10/2024 5:29:00 AM Many thanks for your uplifting words on my write. (Soupmail) SuZ

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/8/2024 12:44:00 PM Suzanne, congratulations on your first place win with your gorgeous set of haikus. Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/10/2024 5:26:00 AM Hi Tania. You brought me some sunshine today with this happy news. Many thanks for the inspiration to write this. SuZ

Karen Croft Date: 10/8/2024 6:15:00 AM Love Autumn and all it's beauty, I'll pass on the snow! Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/10/2024 5:24:00 AM Karen. So happy you enjoyed. SuZ

Michael Coy Date: 10/8/2024 2:46:00 AM Hi Suzanne! You're ding your 'autumn' thing, I see - this time in exquisite haiku. Who said that nature poetry is a dead letter? Well done! Michael Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/10/2024 5:21:00 AM Good you stopped by, Michael. We must keep exhalting nature in words, I am pleased you enjoyed SuZ

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/29/2024 4:49:00 PM wonderful slideshow of autumn detailing how it enthralls us,suZ...fall is my fave season as well...hope you 're good: huggs! Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/10/2024 5:17:00 AM Lovely to see you. Nette: You know me and Autumn, Huggs back.

Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/25/2024 2:44:00 PM A beautiful poem with a good point at the end. Autumn becomes covered with snow. I like how the haiku connect. Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/25/2024 3:16:00 PM So happy you enjoyed my little Haiku play, Hilda I had double fun here because I generated the image with AI. SuZ

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/24/2024 8:35:00 PM From cradle of gold to 'grave' of barren, naked, shivering trees, you have covered it all, Suzanne. :) Gershon Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/25/2024 3:14:00 PM My thanks, Gershon.....No matter how modern we become we can't avoid the seasons.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/24/2024 12:59:00 PM oh I love how you made it like a play with different acts. Very cleverly done, Suzanne. Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/25/2024 3:13:00 PM Hi Andrea: Thanks for stopping by and leaving me a nice comment. We are both Autumn girls. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/24/2024 10:03:00 AM I enjoyed reading your beautiful Autumn Haiku writes for a beautiful time of the year. Great Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a beautiful day writing away............... Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/24/2024 10:24:00 AM Hi Paula, Great to hear from you. Yes I agreee- Autumn is a lovely time of year . SuZ

Arlo Parker Date: 9/24/2024 9:08:00 AM Quite delighting with No. 1 my favorite images. Thanks for posting. :o)) Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/24/2024 10:22:00 AM Thanks Arlo, I always your thoughtful comments. SuZ

Peonieslore xo Date: 9/24/2024 6:42:00 AM My favorite lies within this verse in the 2nd haiku; "final act is snow," star striking haikus .. pleasure reading Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/24/2024 9:51:00 AM Thanks so much for taking time to read and comment. Autumn is upon us. SuZ

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/24/2024 6:17:00 AM Beautifully written haiku Suz, my favourite season without a doubt. Hope you're keeping well, good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/24/2024 6:28:00 AM I'm with you, Tom. My Muse dances with the leaves. Great to see you, too. SuZ

Lin Lane Date: 9/24/2024 4:59:00 AM Your autumnal thoughts enter stage left with a dramatic flurry, and bow to my applause in their final scene. What fine Haiku, Suzanne. Login to Reply Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/24/2024 6:31:00 AM So happy you enjoyed my little stage play, Lin: Thanks for your visit and lovely comment. SuZ