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signs of autumn

leaves tumbling from trees wild geese honking overhead~ bright orange pumpkins frost-etched window panes crimson canopies aflame~ scarecrows atrophied carved jack-o-lanterns bare naked trees stripped of leaves~ the songbirds are mute
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Kendrick Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 6:42 AM
I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
Pinet Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 9:09 AM
Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 10:54 PM
Back with my congrats. You are amazing.
Pinet Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 7:36 AM
Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate it, my friend.
Kitchin Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 1:06 PM
Emile, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set.
Pinet Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Thanks, Tania; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Hi, Emile I especially liked the last lines of two and three. It's so important for a good haiku. Scarecrows atrophied and songbirds that are mute. Love those images.
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate your comments, my friend.
Bartley Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Lovely haikus. Thanks for sharing.
Pinet Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Thanks, Benjamin; I appreciate your comments, my friend.
Empress Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 9:30 AM
Ah dear Emile this is absolutely gorgeous! So autumnal and gives me the halloween vibes too! Your wordplay here and how youv used lines such as “ crimson canopies aflame~ scarecrows atrophied” truly stood out for me! Impressive! “ carved jack-o-lanterns trick-or-treaters in costume~ the songbirds are mute” hauntingly beautiful! I absolutely loved reading this! Best wishes always! Sending you light
Pinet Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Thanks, Ink Empress. I appreciate your comments. Your critiques always bring a smile to my day, my friend. Emile.
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