Signs

Splitting hairs with dull knifes dressed up in bad habits life relegated to picture screens unheard screams darkened diners beckoning candelabras and moonlit drives no wax drips sealing secret treasure grand Mal seizures nor sacred visions hands tied together reckless, restless begging for a night outside I burned your picture last night just to see you move smoke illuminating from those flashing signs OPEN 24 HOURS hidden behind the unlawful order NO VACANCY
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Labyrinth Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 6:35 PM
"I burned your picture last night just to see you move smoke illuminating from those flashing signs"...LOVE IT. But this even better, "hidden behind the unlawful order - NO VACANCY". Dark, brooding and probably very dangerous, do not be fooled by what you see in the Light.
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April 28, 2020 at 7:59 PM
More like Morgana Pendragon/ Morgan le Fay. Very separate and unique individuals of course. Take your pick. Both "M" for short.
Poetry Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Thank you Marion Crane xx
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April 28, 2020 at 6:36 PM
Probably channelling Norman Bates....or his mother...
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