'signifying Hope'

Filtering her imprecise vision an array of ensign so diverse Beautiful devoid of deception each one with its own story to tell Just for her they symbolize so much the dawdling return of her eyesight Suddenly the shells became her all confirmation and hope she prayed for Inspired by Nette’s Parallelogram de crystalline Contest Written by Wilma Neels
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Fraser Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 11:50 AM
A gem of a write Wilma, love the form try out. It suits the piece. Many congratulations on your deserved win :) xx
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March 9, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Wilma,congrats on your win.Enjoyed it.
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest Wilma. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 4:51 AM
Great work that is in the winners' circle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 11:23 PM
this was absolutely stunning, Wilma. Congrats in the contest. it was one of my faves.
Onclaud Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 9:28 PM
i love this take, wilms! congrats on your win in my contest..:) hugggs!
Bunton Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 7:42 PM
Congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 7:23 PM
congrats Wilma on a beautiful win for this brilliant composition on seashells.. magnificent words used to feel the essence luv..
Freeman Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 10:43 AM
Loved your verse signifying hope, Wilma. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 5:51 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing piece of poetry today Wilma. I hope this new week ahead proves fruitful to you within your life and in your poetry also. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 10:55 PM
wow, you found a very unique approach to this contest. I still don't know if I can even come up with anything. I am jealous. I LOVE it.
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March 4, 2012 at 3:24 PM
This is the best piece I've read in a long time my dear Wilma. Always a pure joy to read you. So you liked my Kimo? Lol. I tryed to do a mono rhyme for russell but a couplet fell out instead lol so I took it out of the contest. Luv n sweet hugs to you. Michael
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March 4, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Best of luck in the contest with this lovely write Wilma , Hugs , Declan xx
Poet Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 11:15 AM
I find it very uplifting Wilma.Your poems are always deep and beautifully worded.Best wishes.
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