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'signifying Hope'

Filtering her imprecise vision an array of ensign so diverse Beautiful devoid of deception each one with its own story to tell Just for her they symbolize so much the dawdling return of her eyesight Suddenly the shells became her all confirmation and hope she prayed for Inspired by Nette’s Parallelogram de crystalline Contest Written by Wilma Neels
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/11/2012 11:50:00 AM
A gem of a write Wilma, love the form try out. It suits the piece. Many congratulations on your deserved win :) xx
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Date: 3/9/2012 12:30:00 PM
Wilma,congrats on your win.Enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:51:00 AM
Great work that is in the winners' circle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/8/2012 11:23:00 PM
this was absolutely stunning, Wilma. Congrats in the contest. it was one of my faves.
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Date: 3/8/2012 9:28:00 PM
i love this take, wilms! congrats on your win in my contest..:) hugggs!
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:23:00 PM
congrats Wilma on a beautiful win for this brilliant composition on seashells.. magnificent words used to feel the essence luv..
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:43:00 AM
Loved your verse signifying hope, Wilma. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing piece of poetry today Wilma. I hope this new week ahead proves fruitful to you within your life and in your poetry also. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2012 10:55:00 PM
wow, you found a very unique approach to this contest. I still don't know if I can even come up with anything. I am jealous. I LOVE it.
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Date: 3/4/2012 3:24:00 PM
This is the best piece I've read in a long time my dear Wilma. Always a pure joy to read you. So you liked my Kimo? Lol. I tryed to do a mono rhyme for russell but a couplet fell out instead lol so I took it out of the contest. Luv n sweet hugs to you. Michael
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Date: 3/4/2012 11:19:00 AM
Best of luck in the contest with this lovely write Wilma , Hugs , Declan xx
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Date: 3/4/2012 11:15:00 AM
I find it very uplifting Wilma.Your poems are always deep and beautifully worded.Best wishes.
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