Significance

"What did you do to her Gary?"

"Nothing, she just gave me the silent treatment and 
then said, "see ya later" and took off!" 

"Hell, I don't understand you women! All we want is 
to come home, relax, eat and then be charmed by 
a loving woman.  Is that too much to ask?"

"I mean damn, I work my ass off, walk
in dead beat, hug her, push my paycheck 
in her hand, try to kiss her but uh-uh, forget that!"

"I don't understand you women! What in the hell
do you want?  Just tell me and by damn I'll do it, 
I swear!"

"Gary, all you have to do is appreciate!"

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5/10/13
Contest: APPRECIATION (In Honour of PD)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 11:52 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. AO
Lamoureux Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 6:54 PM
A little appreciation flowing in both directions can be transformative. Great poem!
Manassian Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 8:57 AM
This is an amazing write. Yes...a little appreciate goes a LONG way! Judy, someone gave me a book entitled Sex Begins in the Kitchen! Yea...not what you might think. The crux of the matter is...helping, bearing the load, appreciating goes a long way for getting that nice loving woman at the end of the day! :) BTW....PD stands for Poet Destroyer...Linda! :)
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