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Within my breast  a  promise  of  earth   splendor  

 Jovial  sapphire   lake  sheer  blackness cliffs


Kempt,  sights  amid  whispers  Spirit  renders 

 Lithe   shadows  of  spike  pines  manifest  quiffs


 Meek   pink  aurora  waning   like  a  thief  

Neighboring   Big  Dippers  pouring  , springs  scars 


Operatic skies speckled  stars relief  

 Picturesque  Moon rises  as   well   as  Mars 


Quelled  waft   and   sounds  blows  through  the hours of  night  

 Reflective   flow  of  spring   beside  banks  ends 


 Sacred  of God's  earth   splendor   faintly   light  

 Thrilling   sublime  sights  and  whispers  descends


Unhurried choices amongst no worries

 Venturesome challenges though tangled  miles 


 Whimsical splendor  rich untold journeys  

 Xanthous uniform through seasonal smiles




9/12/2016
Note; Crater Lake National Park’s Oregon

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2016 12:33:00 PM

wow, eve.. i am enthralled by your fine alphabet write which didn't even look like it were so---very scenic and lovely!... huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 9/13/2016 2:30:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Nette, for your complement and your wonderful support. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2016 1:57:00 AM

WOW Eve the imagery is outstanding I didn't realise it was for Kim's alphabet contest it flows so beautifully! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Eve Roper
Date: 9/13/2016 2:03:00 AM

You would not imagine how many times I have changed this because I kept getting the form wrong Thank you so much , Jan. I started with Among Her Biggest Fans and realized I did the couplet but didn’t do the rest of the requirements. This brain is just not retaining anything.