Sight See

Had she and I whet our appetites discretely we'd not need to leave lights on while we two commit what, I have to admit, is one of the biggest tourist sights.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2013 9:31:00 PM

whatever in the world happened to you, John. Are you still out there? You completely fell off the map!!! sure miss ya.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2011 2:23:00 AM

very interesting one, john. yeah, as you can see, I am all about painting the "ideal" picture. poetry for romantics (I'm lost in a bygone era!)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2011 4:29:00 PM

Funny with soft humor, John

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2011 4:08:00 PM

This one has me asking questions for sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and giving sound advice..The only way to go is forward and I hope that what I have learned so far in life will be like a silver spoon true silver that is ...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2011 1:35:00 PM

It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your wonderful poetry and thinking what could be better then this. Thank you for sharing your poetry John. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol

Tony Lane

Date: 8/30/2011 12:31:00 PM

Oh my! I have stories that I will not share. Tony

John Smith
Date: 8/30/2011 1:34:00 PM

Ah, come on! Write it in verse. We'll think it's just poetry.