Sight See

Had she and I whet our appetites 
discretely we'd not need to leave lights 
on while we two commit 
what, I have to admit, 
is one of the biggest tourist sights.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/11/2013 9:31:00 PM
whatever in the world happened to you, John. Are you still out there? You completely fell off the map!!! sure miss ya.
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:23:00 AM
very interesting one, john. yeah, as you can see, I am all about painting the "ideal" picture. poetry for romantics (I'm lost in a bygone era!)
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:29:00 PM
Funny with soft humor, John
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:08:00 PM
This one has me asking questions for sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and giving sound advice..The only way to go is forward and I hope that what I have learned so far in life will be like a silver spoon true silver that is ...Sara
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:35:00 PM
It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your wonderful poetry and thinking what could be better then this. Thank you for sharing your poetry John. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 12:31:00 PM
Oh my! I have stories that I will not share. Tony
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John Smith
Date: 8/30/2011 1:34:00 PM
Ah, come on! Write it in verse. We'll think it's just poetry.
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