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Sighing in the rain

Sighing in the rain It Was a Dull morning Dark and cloudy But we ventured out Rushing to catch the train Before long we were engulfed Half way along the avenue In a downpour of torrential rain Of course Jan had forgotten her brolly So we had to turn back, go home again As she was soaked to the very skin The rest of us were so annoyed We would miss the train to town Be late for the concert And afternoon tea. Our day out spoiled “Not happy Foolish Jan”

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Date: 3/2/2025 5:57:00 AM
Margaret, a well penned, creative poem, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 3/3/2025 1:13:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting Tanya it is truly appreciated. Cheers.

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