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Sighing in the rain

Sighing in the rain 

It 
Was a 
Dull morning
Dark and cloudy
But we ventured out
Rushing to catch the train 
Before long we were engulfed
Half way along the avenue
In a downpour of torrential rain
Of course Jan had forgotten her brolly

So we had to turn back, go home again
As she was soaked to the very skin
The rest of us were so annoyed
We would miss the train to town
Be late for the concert
And afternoon tea.
Our day out spoiled
“Not happy
Foolish
Jan”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/2/2025 5:57:00 AM
Margaret, a well penned, creative poem, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 3/3/2025 1:13:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting Tanya it is truly appreciated. Cheers.

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