A Haikoum Is a series of Haikus sequenced like a Pantoum.
windswept clumps of grass beach scattered with broken shells~ gulls lift on currents sandpipers feed along beach scattered with broken shells~ tiny legs twinkle shorebirds feeding on the tides endless offerings~ tiny legs twinkling each day it changes the tides endless offerings~ waves wash shifting sand changing on each day seabirds gather on sandbars~ waves wash shifting sand ocean reflects sky on sandbars seabirds gather ~ sleeping in warm sun ocean reflects sky people under umbrellas~ sleeping in warm sun windswept clumps of grass people under umbrellas~ gulls lift on currents
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A Haikoum Is a series of Haikus sequenced like a Pantoum.