Doris Culverhouse Poet Narrative

Sienna Eyes

Alert bright sienna eyes,
   Olphactory senses exacting,
       Eager on the ready, loyal by my side,
           On a chase with an elusive field mouse,
             Pudgy belly, voracious appetite
                  Precious friend, precious companion.
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                                                                                      .           /!\
                  ________                                         .                     /!!/
       _____(@@)  l     l\                                             .               /!!/
    uU                  l     l!!!__________________'___________/!!!/
    l________J   /      \!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                   \   /         \!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                    \ l______l !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                     \          /_!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                       l    \/ /                                                                     \!!!!!l
                      ;    l   l                                                                       ;!!!!l

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Sara Kendrick November 3, 2009 at 4:42 PM See that you made the hot poems list. This one is really great. I lot of frustrating work. Keep writing. Mom

Constance La France October 27, 2009 at 1:28 PM wow.. this is wonderful... very creative... and thanks for your comment on my poem.. At Midnight, etc, etc, .....

Caroline Cécile Delacroix October 26, 2009 at 8:42 PM Lovely poem about your Dachsund companion and fun to read and the way you brought it to life. Thanks for sharing and for your comments on my poem. Love, your poet friend, Caroline.

Matthew Anish October 26, 2009 at 2:32 PM Suitable enough to start a comic strip with! The bow - wow - and how! Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Veronica Joseph October 26, 2009 at 11:24 AM oh I love this!

Jay Loveless October 26, 2009 at 10:39 AM what did you mean in that last comments

James Fraser October 24, 2009 at 6:44 PM Excellent Doris, i just love jhl's comment. Looks like he's never seen a dog, or a dachshunds for that matter, thats if thats the breed it is. Golly i'm still chuckling >> James

John Loving Iii October 24, 2009 at 9:49 AM wow. what is it? jhl

Sara Kendrick October 24, 2009 at 4:05 AM She is so beautiful. She has been down here with Cody since around 2pm yesterday until 6;45 this am. Keep writing. Mom

John Freeman October 23, 2009 at 8:50 PM A wiener for sure, they are so playful, and loyal,Smile. Thanks for sharing, Sincerely, Love, moses

Pamela Griffiths October 23, 2009 at 6:45 PM Oh wow, lovely poem. Me and my partner have two yorkshire terriers and two cats. Also tropical fish..... well we are animal lovers. great stuff. Pamx

Ra Oremraeh October 23, 2009 at 11:14 AM This write is so much fun!

Carol Sunshine Brown October 23, 2009 at 4:01 AM I enjoyed reading you poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing it Doris. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Big hugs for your loving companion too. Love, Carol

Brian Strand October 22, 2009 at 11:36 PM Very original Doris one for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Carolyn Devonshire October 22, 2009 at 7:20 PM Oh, Doris, this is precious! Wonderful poem and the image of your pooch brings a big smile to my face. Thank you! Love, Carolyn

Marty Owens October 22, 2009 at 7:17 PM This is so nice...enjoyed reading...Marty