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Sienna Eyes

Alert bright sienna eyes,
   Olphactory senses exacting,
       Eager on the ready, loyal by my side,
           On a chase with an elusive field mouse,
             Pudgy belly, voracious appetite
                  Precious friend, precious companion.
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                                                                                      .           /!\
                  ________                                         .                     /!!/
       _____(@@)  l     l\                                             .               /!!/
    uU                  l     l!!!__________________'___________/!!!/
    l________J   /      \!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                   \   /         \!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                    \ l______l !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                     \          /_!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                       l    \/ /                                                                     \!!!!!l
                      ;    l   l                                                                       ;!!!!l

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2009 4:42:00 PM

See that you made the hot poems list. This one is really great. I lot of frustrating work. Keep writing. Mom

Constance La France

Date: 10/27/2009 1:28:00 PM

wow.. this is wonderful... very creative... and thanks for your comment on my poem.. At Midnight, etc, etc, .....

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/26/2009 8:42:00 PM

Lovely poem about your Dachsund companion and fun to read and the way you brought it to life. Thanks for sharing and for your comments on my poem. Love, your poet friend, Caroline.

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/26/2009 2:32:00 PM

Suitable enough to start a comic strip with! The bow - wow - and how! Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Veronica Joseph

Date: 10/26/2009 11:24:00 AM

oh I love this!

Jay Loveless

Date: 10/26/2009 10:39:00 AM

what did you mean in that last comments

James Fraser

Date: 10/24/2009 6:44:00 PM

Excellent Doris, i just love jhl's comment. Looks like he's never seen a dog, or a dachshunds for that matter, thats if thats the breed it is. Golly i'm still chuckling >> James

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/24/2009 9:49:00 AM

wow. what is it? jhl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2009 4:05:00 AM

She is so beautiful. She has been down here with Cody since around 2pm yesterday until 6;45 this am. Keep writing. Mom

John Freeman

Date: 10/23/2009 8:50:00 PM

A wiener for sure, they are so playful, and loyal,Smile. Thanks for sharing, Sincerely, Love, moses

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/23/2009 6:45:00 PM

Oh wow, lovely poem. Me and my partner have two yorkshire terriers and two cats. Also tropical fish..... well we are animal lovers. great stuff. Pamx

Ra Oremraeh

Date: 10/23/2009 11:14:00 AM

This write is so much fun!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2009 4:01:00 AM

I enjoyed reading you poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing it Doris. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Big hugs for your loving companion too. Love, Carol