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Sienna Eyes

Alert bright sienna eyes,
   Olphactory senses exacting,
       Eager on the ready, loyal by my side,
           On a chase with an elusive field mouse,
             Pudgy belly, voracious appetite
                  Precious friend, precious companion.
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                                                                                      .           /!\
                  ________                                         .                     /!!/
       _____(@@)  l     l\                                             .               /!!/
    uU                  l     l!!!__________________'___________/!!!/
    l________J   /      \!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                   \   /         \!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                    \ l______l !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                     \          /_!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\
                       l    \/ /                                                                     \!!!!!l
                      ;    l   l                                                                       ;!!!!l

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/3/2009 4:42:00 PM
See that you made the hot poems list. This one is really great. I lot of frustrating work. Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 10/27/2009 1:28:00 PM
wow.. this is wonderful... very creative... and thanks for your comment on my poem.. At Midnight, etc, etc, .....
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Date: 10/26/2009 8:42:00 PM
Lovely poem about your Dachsund companion and fun to read and the way you brought it to life. Thanks for sharing and for your comments on my poem. Love, your poet friend, Caroline.
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Date: 10/26/2009 2:32:00 PM
Suitable enough to start a comic strip with! The bow - wow - and how! Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:24:00 AM
oh I love this!
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Date: 10/26/2009 10:39:00 AM
what did you mean in that last comments
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:44:00 PM
Excellent Doris, i just love jhl's comment. Looks like he's never seen a dog, or a dachshunds for that matter, thats if thats the breed it is. Golly i'm still chuckling >> James
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Date: 10/24/2009 9:49:00 AM
wow. what is it? jhl
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:05:00 AM
She is so beautiful. She has been down here with Cody since around 2pm yesterday until 6;45 this am. Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 10/23/2009 8:50:00 PM
A wiener for sure, they are so playful, and loyal,Smile. Thanks for sharing, Sincerely, Love, moses
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Date: 10/23/2009 6:45:00 PM
Oh wow, lovely poem. Me and my partner have two yorkshire terriers and two cats. Also tropical fish..... well we are animal lovers. great stuff. Pamx
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Date: 10/23/2009 11:14:00 AM
This write is so much fun!
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Date: 10/23/2009 4:01:00 AM
I enjoyed reading you poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing it Doris. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Big hugs for your loving companion too. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2009 11:36:00 PM
Very original Doris one for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:20:00 PM
Oh, Doris, this is precious! Wonderful poem and the image of your pooch brings a big smile to my face. Thank you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:17:00 PM
This is so nice...enjoyed reading...Marty
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