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Sidewalk Strutting

Sidewalk Strutting She struts her stuff on salacious sidewalks Where the midnight moon mediates her desires With sensual strides in her high heel attire Sleeping like a baby during the dusky day And then she awakens with sore feet… June.01.2018 She Walks Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/8/2018 6:39:00 AM

Sizzle sizzle...nigh creature, she must be on the prowl for someone sweet to devour.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/6/2018 12:41:00 PM

WW, I want what she's wearing - those shoes!!!:-)! Enjoyed reading this excellent piece so full of wit and charm! Best regards. Pandita

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/5/2018 10:38:00 AM

Lovely alliteration adorns your creative and imagery laden poetic lines, WW.. Beautiful! Best wishes for a win! Warmest wishes, your sis in poetry and friendship.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 6/3/2018 4:20:00 PM

Both the content, end witty twist, and a dose of alliteration are worthy of note, my friend! Those stilettos are much more effective than Nancy's boots:) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/2/2018 12:28:00 PM

Hello Winged Warrior,I am not surprised she has sore feet. have a nice day my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/2/2018 5:50:00 AM

A portrait well painted with words so fitting dear, WW.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2018 3:49:00 PM

WW, love the sense of mystery and reality within your lines... sizzling and lovely though i don't wear stilettos!.. huggs

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/1/2018 11:12:00 AM

Which way did she go? :) I know you were looking. Another fine write my winged friend. have a great weekend!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/1/2018 8:46:00 AM

Elegance, music, the twist of time, daylight and night, dream and real world! A beauty wrapped in a well composed write adorned with the alliteration lullaby! A joy to read Winged Warrior. Stay safe.

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2018 8:06:00 AM

Nice alliteration...