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Sidesplitters

Two old timers sharing a good laugh
 While reminiscing on yesterdays
 As they split old stories in half
 Some stories are blurred and remain in the grays

 You may find them on the park bench no matter the clime
 Exchanging stories and sharing a laugh
 Repeating the same ones from time to time
 And splitting old jokes in half

 4-13-19
 Free Verse Or Rhyme Contest
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 Sponsor: Eve Roper
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Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:31 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 7:25 AM
I've been told that the curse isn't that we remember those old jokes.....the curse is that we keep re-telling them.....
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 8:11 PM
A deserving First Placement and it also got you POTD! Back to congratulate you Joseph. xxoo
Roper Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 7:14 PM
Joseph ,congratulations on Poem of the Day and win in my contest with this creative Rhyme of the two old man sitting on the park bench! Hugs Eve ~`*
May Avatar
April 23, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Thank you for my placement Eve..
Proxenos Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 1:12 PM
Hi Joseph, was out of town for several days - only just read your great write today about these two old friends reminiscing - congratulations Joseph on been awarded POTD - a great honour. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 1:03 PM
- A wonderful writing ... I can see it all and hear their laughter :) - I wish you a wonderful Easter, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 10:51 AM
Joseph, I have seen them! This is wonderful and a winner for me. I love your home page cover photo too, amazing, and congrats on POTD, it deserves that too !
Sands Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
Williams Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 1:27 AM
A great poem Joseph. Congratulations on your POTD honors my friend....Maria Hugs
Duet Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 10:24 PM
This is so clever. It reminds me of the old men who all gather together under a big tree here in my town. Whenever you pass by you can see them all laughing and having such a good time.
Doll Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 9:22 PM
Story telling keeps us young and connected. Great poem and congratulations on POTD, Joseph. Best Wishes~ Warren.
Lindley Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Congratulations on POTD. I really enjoyed this one and I am far too busy writing to ever be sitting on a park bench ajawin' with another old codger my friend like myself..
Poetry Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Friendship makes life happy...poetry makes life a paradise... regards alkas poetry
Kitchin Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Congratulations on POTD with your lovely penned poem!
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 5:56 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your potd joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Your words float through the sky, and touch every cloud. :) Congratulations Joseph, on Poem of the Day. I am smiling. ~ Brandy
Wanter Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on this light hearted fun read.
Warrior Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 8:39 AM
A sidesplitting laugh...Congrats!!! on POTD!! Joseph...happy oldtimer endings...^WW^...{*J*}
Michael Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Two old timers...with their bags of jokes...Nice...Congratulations Joseph...
La France Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Joseph, a wonderful poem and take on the selected photo and congratulations on POTD ~
Messina Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 7:17 AM
Wonderful take on the photo, spot on. Congrats on POTD and best wishes for a win in the contest
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 7:04 AM
Absolutely darling penning Joseph! Congratulations on POTD, xomo!
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:51 AM
Congrats Joseph on poem of the day..enjoyed the chat of two old timers.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 6:17 AM
You portrayed these two old friends perfectly Joseph. I love your line about them repeating them. Congratulations on your deserving POTD! xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 1:28 AM
Your take on the pic is spot on Joseph, good luck and congrats on POTD. Tom.
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