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Two old timers sharing a good laugh While reminiscing on yesterdays As they split old stories in half Some stories are blurred and remain in the grays You may find them on the park bench no matter the clime Exchanging stories and sharing a laugh Repeating the same ones from time to time And splitting old jokes in half 4-13-19 Free Verse Or Rhyme Contest Photo 2 Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 4/25/2019 11:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/24/2019 7:25:00 AM
I've been told that the curse isn't that we remember those old jokes.....the curse is that we keep re-telling them.....
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Date: 4/23/2019 8:11:00 PM
A deserving First Placement and it also got you POTD! Back to congratulate you Joseph. xxoo
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Date: 4/23/2019 7:14:00 PM
Joseph ,congratulations on Poem of the Day and win in my contest with this creative Rhyme of the two old man sitting on the park bench! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/23/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Eve..
Date: 4/18/2019 1:12:00 PM
Hi Joseph, was out of town for several days - only just read your great write today about these two old friends reminiscing - congratulations Joseph on been awarded POTD - a great honour. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/17/2019 1:03:00 PM
- A wonderful writing ... I can see it all and hear their laughter :) - I wish you a wonderful Easter, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/16/2019 10:51:00 AM
Joseph, I have seen them! This is wonderful and a winner for me. I love your home page cover photo too, amazing, and congrats on POTD, it deserves that too !
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Date: 4/16/2019 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 4/16/2019 1:27:00 AM
A great poem Joseph. Congratulations on your POTD honors my friend....Maria Hugs
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Date: 4/15/2019 10:24:00 PM
This is so clever. It reminds me of the old men who all gather together under a big tree here in my town. Whenever you pass by you can see them all laughing and having such a good time.
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Date: 4/15/2019 9:22:00 PM
Story telling keeps us young and connected. Great poem and congratulations on POTD, Joseph. Best Wishes~ Warren.
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Date: 4/15/2019 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. I really enjoyed this one and I am far too busy writing to ever be sitting on a park bench ajawin' with another old codger my friend like myself..
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Date: 4/15/2019 6:21:00 PM
Friendship makes life happy...poetry makes life a paradise... regards alkas poetry
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Date: 4/15/2019 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD with your lovely penned poem!
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Date: 4/15/2019 5:56:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your potd joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2019 4:19:00 PM
Your words float through the sky, and touch every cloud. :) Congratulations Joseph, on Poem of the Day. I am smiling. ~ Brandy
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Date: 4/15/2019 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on this light hearted fun read.
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Date: 4/15/2019 8:39:00 AM
A sidesplitting laugh...Congrats!!! on POTD!! Joseph...happy oldtimer endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 4/15/2019 8:29:00 AM
Two old timers...with their bags of jokes...Nice...Congratulations Joseph...
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Date: 4/15/2019 8:27:00 AM
Joseph, a wonderful poem and take on the selected photo and congratulations on POTD ~
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Date: 4/15/2019 7:17:00 AM
Wonderful take on the photo, spot on. Congrats on POTD and best wishes for a win in the contest
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Date: 4/15/2019 7:04:00 AM
Absolutely darling penning Joseph! Congratulations on POTD, xomo!
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Date: 4/15/2019 6:51:00 AM
Congrats Joseph on poem of the day..enjoyed the chat of two old timers.
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Date: 4/15/2019 6:17:00 AM
You portrayed these two old friends perfectly Joseph. I love your line about them repeating them. Congratulations on your deserving POTD! xxoo
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Date: 4/15/2019 1:28:00 AM
Your take on the pic is spot on Joseph, good luck and congrats on POTD. Tom.
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