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Sick Sick Sick

Sick Sick Sick. There was a youngin named was Vick She caught a cold now she's sick. She can't go to school, she can't eat but lovely gruel. She got sick because she got kissed on By another youngin’ named Jackson. "You'd better go to a doctor’s soon or begin eating at every moon! If you eat and get strong, and you won't be there very long! You'll be outside playing and things you like- like playing tennis or volleyball or even taking a hike! You can feed the horse without even feeling hoarse." "Can I search for metal?" "Well, of course! You can play games and climb the fence, You could even learn to fence! “Give me that pill! I need to be rid of this ill!" So the doctor said, "Now let’s listen and don’t think twice; now don't be kissin' And if you don’t obey what I’ve said, Then you'll climb right back here in bed!"

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Date: 5/1/2017 8:11:00 PM
This reminds me so much of my best friend's poetry, love it!!
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Date: 5/1/2017 2:03:00 PM
- Thank you for your smiley poem, Jess - Great written - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - Sun :)
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Date: 5/1/2017 12:38:00 PM
Hi Jess , very funny fast witty write , you had me smiling thanks :))) hugs from Ireland
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Date: 4/29/2017 12:11:00 AM
This is a very funny poem, and it made me chuckle :) The first few lines were almost a Limerick! Welcome to PoetrySoup
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