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Sick

Being sick with a snotty nose
A cough, fatigue, one of those colds???
For goodness sake's everyone knows
Grandmothers are too sophicated 
To wear anything but fancy clothes
Surely not a Kleenex box attached
To their chair, and looking unkempt
And flowing with dispair  

While still sick and in the bed
A horrible event ran through the homestead
In the middle of early morn
During an outright winter storm
A car left the road and into my yard
Dropping parts and getting scarred
Crashed landing like thunder in a flash
Shaking the sturdy window sash
Two DOS(dead on scene) next to flower bed
Two living one barely by a thread

One lesson learned during this ordeal
Never ever get behind the wheel
While drinking, for that can kill
Twenty-two years a very short life
Not long enough for the musican's fife
To play for one to dance and enjoy 
Just barely out the door, still just a boy

Lesson two learned from this trip around
No matter how bad the situation sounds
Life could issue out a much worse thing
Leaving grief and suffering in its wake
It is good to be alive for goodness sake
Even though my nose drips goop
And I am in on the latest scoop
My heart aches for the losses that linger
Just out my front door, where death points finger





About 3:30 Friday morning January 22, 2016
Chasen Nicklason age 22 died
A young lady in the front passenger side died
One man in the back seat in serious condition
Another young man also injuried 
This was in my front yard..

Chasen A. Nicholson, age 22, of Yatesville, died Friday, January 22, 2016 in Thomaston.  

Mr. Nicholson was born January 13, 1994 in Thomaston to Deanna R. Nicholson and Chuck D. Nicholson II. He was a Diesel Mechanic for Speedway Ford in Griffin, a member of the Technical College Honor Society, and a member of Lila Memorial Baptist Church.

He is survived by his parents, Deanna R. Nicholson of Yatesville, and Chuck D. Nicholson II, of Thomaston; sisters, Paige Nicholson (Daniel Peterson),  D.J. Nicholson, and April Nicholson, all of Yatesville; grandparents, Paul (Wanda) Clark, and Shirley Nicholson. He is preceded in death by his grandfather, Charlie Nicholson; and great-grandmother, Claudia Raybon.
 
Funeral serves for Mr. Nicholson will be held on Monday, January 25, 2016 at 2:00 PM in the Chapel of Coggins Funeral Home. The family will receive friends on Monday, January 25, 2016 from 12:00 - 2:00 PM. 

In lieu of flowers the family has requested that memorial donations be made to the St. Jude Children's Hospital, 501 St. Jude Place, Memphis TN 38105 or to www.stjude.org 

Finis'
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Makama Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:20 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
Salehi Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:00 AM
So Sad...
Nunez Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:21 AM
The title caught my attention. So sorry about what happened right in your front yard, Sara. Life can just be taken away from us just like that. Makes one appreciate it more. I hope you're feeling better. Tale care always. :-)
Callus Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 9:23 AM
So very sad and tragic! A nightmare for the parents of the ones involved, and it must have been a shock for you also, Sara! Hope you are feeling better' take care. // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Sara this is really sad.. :( tragic for the man.. God bless His soul and that HE keep us safe always.. Get well soon.. some remarkable lines always.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)
A   Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Sara, Sorry, to hear about Chasen, he was young. It's a tragedy. A nigthmare. Thank you dear lady, for adding the note. LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:46 AM
PD, I did not know this family personally..I have heard of the Nicholsons around here but I don't think that I have ever met any of them personally..I know that this has to be hard for the family..Someone said that the young lady had just had a baby so the baby is left without parents..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
A   Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:55 PM
SARA, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:43 AM
You are quite welcome.. It is almost impossible to give a good comment back here then comment on the person's poems as well and I feel it is more important to comment on their work to encourage them to keep writing..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 5:52 PM
a sullen event well quilled.. i hope you are alright after this tragic moment, sara... huggs
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Nette, Thanks for the visit to my page..I am getting better..Both the emotion and the illness(whatever it is) lingers some..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Hey did you add on. It looks longer today. I like the last line. Eerie!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Well, most poems that I write don't go exactly as I had planned and this one no different..However, I wish that it had not taken this turn..Sara
Curtis Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Sorry Sara, I wish these words could take away all the evils of the day.
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:31 AM
I too wish that all the evils of the world would disappear but someday there will be peace and harmony..Sara
Sage Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 3:25 PM
this ended more than i thought...it's saddening, hope you're doing well though? well wishes
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:30 AM
I am still dealing with the end results..Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 12:47 PM
...... Nose drip becomes just "blueberry" ...... compared with what happened in your garden, Sara ..... terrible !!! - Hope everything is fine with you .... a bit of a shock ..... and chaos an early morning - Best wishes for good health and a "quiet" weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Thanks for the visit to my page..I am still dealing with the end results of the wreck..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 9:56 AM
it's the season for those sniffs.. wonderfully depicted.. hope you are better, sara.. looking forward to the finished product!..huggs
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:40 AM
I have now finished but not like I was thinking I would go..Sara
Sage Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 6:48 PM
i hope the poem ends with the vibrant you Sara...
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:37 AM
WS, Still feeling ill but not quite as bad as ten days ago..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Ha. you must be feeling under the weather to be having this on your mind! but we take our poetry where we can get it!! Good luck with your finish. I hope it finishes with you being all well.
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 5:36 PM
Yup!!! I am under the weather..Been 9 days now but tomorrow is the tenth day..They say one week to ten days for a cold so tomorrow has magic in it..Sara
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Sara, get well soon, unfinished or not it did send your message well.. God bless.. smiles~Olive Eloisa =`)
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:34 AM
I hope that the illness goes away..I feel so bad for the parents and all the relatives of the young people that were injured and died..Sara
A   Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:58 PM
I was sick like this over a month ago. It was a very ugly feeling, great read. Linda
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:39 AM
They say here that whatever is going around just lingers on and on..I hope that I am at the end of it though..Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 12:44 PM
- Simply feel terrible ............. good recovery, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Still hoping that the end of this illness is in sight..Sara
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