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Shynell-Tasha-Tinina-Chana (continued)

Listen, I know the game don't give it up now. I know my words don't align with popular culture and cut deeper than a two edged sword and may cause discomfort but not as much as the pain when he doesn't call again and it was a fraud There is no time for learning the hard way Don't give it up now!

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Date: 7/4/2010 5:21:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned in this one..I guess that means that he is just not that into you....Sara
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Date: 7/3/2010 5:36:00 AM
So true Tavarus ..words DO cut deeper than a two edged sword ..even when we write we must be careful to offer wise advice as u have in your creative write .. please let me know when u post a new poem.. I have another friend..Ravindra Kapoor who lets me know when he posts from India ..he does series poetry from his Father's writing which are beautiful as your poetry is too.. so please send me a comment when u do a new poem.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:33:00 PM
When he doesn't call again--Everyone has been there and it is real pain, raw live-pain. you nailed it.
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