Shynell-Tasha-Tinina-Chana (Continued)

Listen, I know the game
don't give it up now.
I know my words don't align
with popular culture
and cut deeper than a two edged sword
and may cause discomfort but not
as much as the pain when he doesn't call again
and it was a fraud
There is no time for learning the hard way
Don't give it up now!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/4/2010 5:21:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned in this one..I guess that means that he is just not that into you....Sara
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Date: 7/3/2010 5:36:00 AM
So true Tavarus ..words DO cut deeper than a two edged sword ..even when we write we must be careful to offer wise advice as u have in your creative write .. please let me know when u post a new poem.. I have another friend..Ravindra Kapoor who lets me know when he posts from India ..he does series poetry from his Father's writing which are beautiful as your poetry is too.. so please send me a comment when u do a new poem.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:33:00 PM
When he doesn't call again--Everyone has been there and it is real pain, raw live-pain. you nailed it.
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