Shy People

SHY PEOPLE

Shy people hide
their feelings inside
their heads
their houses
their mouths

sometimes a giggle pops out
but then they turn popsicle-red
and disappear once again

Shy people stand against walls
eyes diverted, feet shuffling nervously,
longing for a dance...a romance
but don’t forge a straight path

You look like a train coming straight at them,
and they like a deer in the headlights

Approach the shy one cautiously,
one silent step at a time,
not too close,
then tell a pleasant joke to your friend,
perhaps the shy one will smile
or restrain a laugh with her palm.

You can let her see your sideways glance,
but keep mildly chatting with your friend.

Shy people stay that way for a long long time
until the shackles fall fearlessly at your feet
then no longer shy
they make you run
your heart pounding
at the sound

of their never ending conversation
all the words in their heads
their houses
their mouths

pop out like a volcanic eruption
that can’t be stopped

You grab her hand and kiss her into submission,
but remember, it is only a brief intermission.

12/4/2017
People Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Kim, I absolutely love your thoughtful, insightful poem!! Congratulations to you on a great piece as well as your podium finish! Happy holidays and a great 2018 to you and yours! :) Bartholomew
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Happy holidays, Bartholomew! Thank you so much! <3
Tripp Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations are in order!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Talbot Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 12:56 AM
How I once lived you have described, evoking many good memories. Congratulations on your placement Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Thank you, Mick!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 12:50 AM
Congrats on your great win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:21 PM
Well said, Kim, congratulations on your win :) Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Thanks, Eve! xx
Pandit Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:18 PM
Congrats Kim for a top placement..well deserved!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Thanks, Vijay! <3
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:26 PM
I enjoyed your poem, congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Thanks so much, Richard!!
Parmale Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Ohh,This is very sweet sweet write..I being a shameless guy,always used to wonder how to deal with shy people...You made life easier for me...Very adoring poem...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Thanks, Anand! In high school one girl thought i was snobby when I was just shy...lol! Not shy anymore. :)
Pett Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Well written Kim, so well described, shyness takes us to a very lonely place. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, Roy!
Kannan Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 1:19 AM
So true... Beautifully described the shy people... Enjoyed it... Good luck in the contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, Supraja! :)
Hoffman Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Awesome depiction of a shy person Kim; been there, done that too as a teen! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Thank you, Che!
Krampe Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:21 PM
Very good description, Kim. Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Thank you, Agnes!
Michael Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 5:58 PM
You described the shy ones...very well...nicely done...All the best Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Thanks Arturo!
Gondolf Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Kim, this sounds like you are describing my early teen years, I was very much this way. Not so much any more... John
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Same as me, John :):)
Rigoler Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 4:29 PM
I've seen many people that fit your description exactly, Kim. Many reasons contribute to this behavior. Thank you for reading Donna and Don, gross I admit but not unheard of. / M
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 4:31 PM
LOL...We all go where our poetry takes us
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