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SHY PEOPLE Shy people hide their feelings inside their heads their houses their mouths sometimes a giggle pops out but then they turn popsicle-red and disappear once again Shy people stand against walls eyes diverted, feet shuffling nervously, longing for a dance...a romance but don’t forge a straight path You look like a train coming straight at them, and they like a deer in the headlights Approach the shy one cautiously, one silent step at a time, not too close, then tell a pleasant joke to your friend, perhaps the shy one will smile or restrain a laugh with her palm. You can let her see your sideways glance, but keep mildly chatting with your friend. Shy people stay that way for a long long time until the shackles fall fearlessly at your feet then no longer shy they make you run your heart pounding at the sound of their never ending conversation all the words in their heads their houses their mouths pop out like a volcanic eruption that can’t be stopped You grab her hand and kiss her into submission, but remember, it is only a brief intermission. 12/4/2017 People Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/13/2017 12:17:00 PM
Kim, I absolutely love your thoughtful, insightful poem!! Congratulations to you on a great piece as well as your podium finish! Happy holidays and a great 2018 to you and yours! :) Bartholomew
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 1:16:00 PM
Happy holidays, Bartholomew! Thank you so much! <3
Date: 12/12/2017 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations are in order!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Date: 12/12/2017 12:56:00 AM
How I once lived you have described, evoking many good memories. Congratulations on your placement Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Mick!
Date: 12/12/2017 12:50:00 AM
Congrats on your great win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 12/11/2017 7:21:00 PM
Well said, Kim, congratulations on your win :) Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 7:42:00 PM
Thanks, Eve! xx
Date: 12/11/2017 7:18:00 PM
Congrats Kim for a top placement..well deserved!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay! <3
Date: 12/11/2017 6:26:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 6:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, Richard!!
Date: 12/9/2017 7:29:00 AM
Ohh,This is very sweet sweet write..I being a shameless guy,always used to wonder how to deal with shy people...You made life easier for me...Very adoring poem...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thanks, Anand! In high school one girl thought i was snobby when I was just shy...lol! Not shy anymore. :)
Date: 12/6/2017 7:07:00 AM
Well written Kim, so well described, shyness takes us to a very lonely place. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, Roy!
Date: 12/5/2017 1:19:00 AM
So true... Beautifully described the shy people... Enjoyed it... Good luck in the contest...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2017 6:06:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja! :)
Date: 12/4/2017 8:53:00 PM
Awesome depiction of a shy person Kim; been there, done that too as a teen! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Che!
Date: 12/4/2017 6:21:00 PM
Very good description, Kim. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes!
Date: 12/4/2017 5:58:00 PM
You described the shy ones...very well...nicely done...All the best Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Arturo!
Date: 12/4/2017 4:59:00 PM
Kim, this sounds like you are describing my early teen years, I was very much this way. Not so much any more... John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 5:15:00 PM
Same as me, John :):)
Date: 12/4/2017 4:29:00 PM
I've seen many people that fit your description exactly, Kim. Many reasons contribute to this behavior. Thank you for reading Donna and Don, gross I admit but not unheard of. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 4:31:00 PM
LOL...We all go where our poetry takes us

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