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My devious plot worked A beautiful woman talked to me! All because of my shirt! I might as well have been superman All decked out in Canadian Red If only I had anticipated........ If only my tongue was not tied Around my neck like rope I might have had more etiquette I might have said so, so many things Or I might have said nothing at all If only I wasn’t being strangled....... By my inadequate lack of words For I saw inside in that flashing moment A heart so kind and enticingly sweet Just imagine if I had been so bold To kiss such a Parisii so sweet Even if this took the gallantry of time....... Imagine if I had not stumbled My tongue between my feet If only I had said to her........... Would you ever like to meet? Coffee, wine or patisserie? Envious thoughts of sunnier days Envelopes filled with un-mailed thoughts Chandelier dreams light somber fall skies Coffee cups waiting for a second taste Alas I said good bye and turned away Shyness hidden deep inside of me Was the victor of the day So if you ever should read this verse I hope I bring you bountiful smiles Paris of flowers and random encounters......... You surely succeeded to disarm If one day, we should ever meet again Roses by twelve I would thee treat

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Date: 11/16/2015 10:22:00 AM
This was lovely Arthur; and a Paris theme! My favorite city! Cheers, Kim
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Date: 11/15/2015 8:56:00 PM
Smiling....this is beautiful Arthur! You captured the beauty of Paris wonderfully. Glad you returned before the attacks started. Hugs
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Date: 11/15/2015 8:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Cecilia! hugs!
Date: 11/15/2015 8:58:00 AM
This is sweet Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Richard! :)
Date: 11/14/2015 9:04:00 AM
Hello,my dear friend Art! I love reading this so sweet and lovely piece of yours. So you've been there? I'm sorry, I was carried away by your latest poem about Paris. Now, I'm so happy to hear that you've been there (I'm envious;)) and met someone. A new acquaintance of mine who lives there said, it's really a romantic place.. a paradise. I hope, when you go back there you'll leave your shyness in your country:)). Thanks a lot for sharing and also for your visit.Hugs! love lots,Leonora
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:22:00 PM
Yes I just returned about 1 week before the tragedy happened, and yes Paris for me is a great beautiful city!
Date: 11/12/2015 8:56:00 AM
Deeelightful read, Arthur. Hope you get back there and meet her again. :-)
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Date: 11/15/2015 4:20:00 PM
Sadly things have changed for the worse there, but life is always full of wonderful surprises as well!
Date: 11/11/2015 11:18:00 PM
Arthur, I see your time in Paris was good. But it would have been better if you didn't get over whelmed with shyness. If it's meant to be you will go back to Paris and the story that you so skillfully penned will have a happy ending.:-) Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:19:00 PM
Oh I did use some poetic license here, you know to make the story better and make me look good! LOL
Date: 11/11/2015 10:22:00 PM
Dear Arthur If she ever read this poem she'd be so flattered by this bashful gentleman's words of praise and silent worship, I know I'd be flattered by this poem if it was written for me, awesomely sweet and elegantly beautiful your a passionate fellow my romantic friend,one day you'll find your sweet Juliet, Mr. Romeo, I give you a seven, and welcome home my friend, cheri We've missed you around this site, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for such nice words Cherl! Hugs!
Date: 11/11/2015 8:51:00 PM
Wonderful poem my friend. A7. Once as a young man I was so shy. At age 18 when this ravenously beautiful girl asked me out, I stammered out --ok. First date went slow but ok. By our third date we became deeply "involved" --spending a weekend at her friend's cabin just us! Never looked back after that.. Never was shy again!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Robert! I know the feeling.
Date: 11/11/2015 6:12:00 PM
aww Arthur you I hoped you would meet the woman of your dreams on your trip to Paris - you are just going to have to get yourself back there my friend - seriously shyness can be such an issue and this write brought a lump to my throat:-( hugs and hugs some more jan xx7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:13:00 PM
I am sure is something we all feel at times! Thus all the wine!
Date: 11/11/2015 3:23:00 PM
A most delightful poem, Arthur! Romance in France, hindered by shyness. Next time do a rewind, and start afresh! #7 // paul
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Date: 11/15/2015 4:12:00 PM
Well I did use some poetic license here! Thanks!
Date: 11/11/2015 3:06:00 PM
Fantastique, n'est pas?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:12:00 PM
comme tous les paris :)
Date: 11/11/2015 2:04:00 PM
Envelopes filled with un-mailed thoughts, thought this a beautiful line, Photos are amazing.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:10:00 PM
Why thank you! :)
Date: 11/11/2015 1:57:00 PM
Coffee cups waiting for a second taste- Really loved this line. A fantastic poem Arthur. Tres jolie : )..Magnifique : )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Charmaine!!! :)
Date: 11/11/2015 11:03:00 AM
To answer all the soup mails here, yes I took these photos while in Paris and hope to show many more in future poems!
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:59:00 AM
Wow. This one is very well stitched together with style and deep feelings brought together by your poetic soul. The flow was perfect and the poem took on an air of familiarity with a subtle flavor of fate running through it. Emile. #7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Emile!
Date: 11/11/2015 8:11:00 AM
Bienvenue au Canada, mon ami Arthur! Voici un poeme extraordinaire de toi qui j'aime! A wonderful poem that certainly deserves our attention, dear Arthur! Merci pour ta visite!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/11/2015 11:01:00 AM
et un grand merci a toi aussi! Thanks Demetrios!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/11/2015 11:01:00 AM
Sorry, one comment went on wrong line! LOL
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Afolabi, by chance I was just reading your poem on dedication to mother, wonderful write!
Date: 11/11/2015 2:14:00 AM
Brilliant write Arthur. I love how it was constructed beautiful and excellent.............A.M.
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Date: 11/11/2015 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Afolabi, by chance I was just reading your poem on dedication to mother, wonderful write!
Date: 11/11/2015 12:36:00 AM
oh my, this is a delightful treat to read from you . What a great poem to show us upon your arrival back home! Love it, Arthur.(and I am not just sayng that because of your blog. haha)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/11/2015 10:58:00 AM
LOL its ok Andrea, I accept all exaggerations and lies!!!!!!! Hugs!!!
Date: 11/10/2015 10:52:00 PM
a chance meeting left to serendipity or reverie... charming me so, arthur..paris does this to me as well!..hugggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/11/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thank you, and yes I can not think of a better city to find poetic inspiration!
Date: 11/10/2015 10:33:00 PM
Oh my goodness Arthur Hello, I want to read this entire piece but l see the first statute that puts in the mind of Robin Williams and I have to come back lol.:-) Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/11/2015 10:57:00 AM
Well, its for sure not him, although I imagined it being me! I took the photo while in Paris.
Date: 11/10/2015 10:18:00 PM
I'm sure it was her that was tongue tied. Lovely
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/11/2015 10:56:00 AM
Not so sure about that, but thanks for the vote of confidence! LOL
Date: 11/10/2015 8:53:00 PM
"Chandelier dreams light somber fall skies." Oh Arthur, this is so romantic. You even spoke of a dozen roses as, "Roses by twelve." Enchanteur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/10/2015 8:56:00 PM
Voila, merci beaucoup ma chère

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