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Shy Guy

Her beauty glitters so bright i can't face her Her sparkling white teeth well dentiotioned and moderately spaced. Her body structure takes my breath away Her hair,long, swavy, dark and shiny. Her heart? hmmn...i'm hoping to find that out pretty soon. Everyday, i see her and smile but she never for once smiled back I come home with a frown and ask "when would she notice me" I like her(no doubt) but i don't know how to tell her. She walks smartly, dresses homely and jst my type! How do i get her to notice me?would she ever do? I think i know just what to do. I'll just pour out my heart in a letter, Leave it at her back door While i wait for her to holla back Telling me how she feel ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/12/2012 7:55:00 AM
You will make a good toaster. That shit hot!
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Dharmy. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:10:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/12/2009 8:04:00 AM
ThAnKs aLoT ChArMa.. Im gLaD U lIkE It... DiS SiTe IS cOoL.. wIt frnDS LIKE u...
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Date: 12/11/2009 10:30:00 PM
The letter is a sweet idea and this poem is full of charm.Welcome to the site--Charma
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