Shutter Speed Contest

Next Stop F-stop 2.8

Got to get out of the city,
if you want to see the galaxy.
(Be sure to grab your camera on your way out the door,
cause there’s no turning back).

Must escape man’s brilliance,
man’s electric-mind;
street lamps with flesh-light, blue-light, and corpse-light, 
lights that hum, 
lights that pop, 
lights with no eyes,
lamps that hang their heads above the road,
resigned to line and light the asphalt and gutters.
Man’s light pollutes the night,
hides the way out of the city,
that milky way up and out through the sky.
I’ve got to get out of the city.

Shut up behind night's shutters,
you have to leave
if you want to see, what possibilities are left in creation.

Drive hours in the dark,
just to see how far infinity goes,
dust as big as planets
leaving a star-crumb trail
back to the beginning,
before city lights,
before corpse-light,
before man light,
all the way back to that One light
that lit the world with a bang. 

Be sure to set your shutter as wide as your eyes,
ready to make room for starlight,
your camera the only passenger.
Leave the city;
no road;
no map;
next stop f-stop 2.8.

Draft 2 May 15, 2020
Shutter Speed Contest
Sponsor Kai Michael Neumann

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/3/2020 11:10:00 AM
So true. Love where you say, "your camera the only passenger." It is also great out at sea at night. Enjoy your day................
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Date: 5/16/2020 1:37:00 PM
Kai, saving this as a fave!
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Jack Webster
Date: 5/19/2020 12:11:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Kim!
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