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Tom, Dick and Harry all walked in a line as they wove through the jungle's tall trees, The sounds from above sent shivers down their spines but they all felt safe walking in threes. 'Shush...did you hear that?' whispered Tom from the back, 'something snapped in that undergrowth thick', 'Just a tree' said Harry,'with a branch breaking off ' ' Even trees must get old ', snorted Dick. As they trudged off ahead 'Did you hear that?' Dick said, ' like a rumble, it seemed very close' 'Just a storm' , Harry chirped, 'quite far off, it won't hurt, jungles get lots of them, I suppose' Later on, far ahead 'did you hear that?' Harry said, 'like a roar, and it sounded REAL close!', no reply, wondered why, turned around, they were gone- and the Tiger's breath tickled his nose. For contest 'Shush...did you hear that?', sponsor Anthony Slausen 12th September 2018

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Date: 9/12/2018 8:57:00 AM
Lovely storytelling, Viv. Beautifully vivid description. Bravo.
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Date: 9/12/2018 7:58:00 AM
Haha, bet they had to change their underwear. Good luck Viv, a gem. Tom
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:45:00 AM
"like a roar and it sounded REAL close." Hilarious! Nice in every way, Viv.
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:37:00 AM
This entry was so creative Viv. You captured intrigue and fear in your story. Very well written! : )
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Date: 9/12/2018 1:52:00 AM
A clever and fun write.
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Date: 9/12/2018 1:37:00 AM
Oh thats so good, great write Viv, reminds me a trek of my own!
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