Shush Did You Hear That

Tom, Dick and Harry all walked in a line
as they wove through the jungle's tall trees,
The sounds from above sent shivers down their spines
but they all felt safe walking in threes.
'Shush...did you hear that?' whispered Tom from the back,
'something snapped in that undergrowth thick',
'Just a tree' said Harry,'with a branch breaking off '
' Even trees must get old ', snorted Dick.
As they trudged off ahead 'Did you hear that?' Dick said,
' like a rumble, it seemed very close'
'Just a storm' , Harry chirped, 'quite far off, it won't hurt,
jungles get lots of them, I suppose'
Later on, far ahead 'did you hear that?' Harry said,
'like a roar, and it sounded REAL close!',
no reply, wondered why, turned around, they were gone-
and  the Tiger's breath  tickled his nose.

For contest 'Shush...did you hear that?', sponsor Anthony Slausen
12th September 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Lovely storytelling, Viv. Beautifully vivid description. Bravo.
Cunningham Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Haha, bet they had to change their underwear. Good luck Viv, a gem. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:45 AM
"like a roar and it sounded REAL close." Hilarious! Nice in every way, Viv.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 3:37 AM
This entry was so creative Viv. You captured intrigue and fear in your story. Very well written! : )
Lamoureux Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 1:52 AM
A clever and fun write.
Vaso Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 1:37 AM
Oh thats so good, great write Viv, reminds me a trek of my own!
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