Shurvi

Shurvi 

Shurvi was still an infant 
Who knew nothing about her sin,
For being born a girl child 
She was the cause of her parents' chagrin. 

People turned their faces away 
Relatives poke fun at them 
A girl was born, not a boy 
Oh! What a disgrace, such a shame.

As the time passed by,
Shurvi learned to walk on her feet 
Joined the school amidst the lads 
With a determination as hard as concrete. 

Shurvi has turned twenty by now, 
She must go and conquer her dream 
Chose the army against all odds 
Something for which she was keen. 

Served her best in the military 
Earned the noble badge of honour 
A moment of pride for her parents 
As loads of blessings showered upon her. 

Here comes our valiant little Shurvi 
Cheers the crowd and the clan 
Standing tall in her army uniform 
She proves herself no less than a Man.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Madden Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Beautifully penned down and the flow of poem has been carefully maintained from the beginning till the end. Good job!!
Bose Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Thanks
Sidra Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 1:02 PM
I needed this. I'm feeling so proud right now. Can't express how much I like your poems, they are absolutely relevant and praiseworthy. You are doing great things. Keep it up.
Bose Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Thank you.
Agustin Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 12:24 AM
Thanks for this. Likewise, cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, and Holiday season while sharing "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you. Welcome to PS!
Bose Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Thank you
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