Shunned After Serving - a Veteran's Story

I did my time
I paid my dues
To come "home"
To be with you ...

I opened my heart
I was vulnerable to belong
I thought we were friends
But it didn't take long...

For you to step on my spirit
Painting pictures of lies
But you told me to go
Now I'm mad, I won't cry.

You shunned me away
I asked for forgiveness
And I'm saddened to say
But you won't kill my spirit!  

Sometimes I think about it
How you stepped on my heart
Then told me to walk
But I can see through the dark.

How could people be so cruel
And twist every truth
There's video to show
There's evidence, there's proof!

I may not be welcomed
But I'll tell you this much
You can shun me today
But it won't kill this veteran's heart. 

One day you'll see
This never had to be
You can throw me away
But I'll  hold the key...not for you...
        but for me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Hello Kelly Besaw Gallo, good for you. You deserve better. one day you will find the true love you deserve. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 3:27 PM
Hello Kelly , I agree with you that the vetrens should be respected. This upsets me to vets fight a war come back home to family and begin a new. Some people do not think. Your welcome Kelly. Hugs Darlene.
Besaw Gallo Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 12:33 PM
Thank you Darlene. This was actually about a veteran organization I belong-"ed" to. Just because we are veterans doesn't mean everyone is treated kindly and with respect -- I in particular was shunned...Thank you for your thoughtful words tho. ~Kelly
Bowden Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 5:20 AM
Wishing you all the best. Veterans are the reason the rest of us sleep safe at night. Keep your chin up and take care.
Besaw Gallo Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 3:44 AM
Thank you Craig. I had a bad experience at of places...the American Legion...even our own comrades can be cruel...It's not the best of my poems but it's good regardless to get it on paper...then to get a thoughtful set of eyes on my pain makes it so worth the while to write. Thank you for your thoughtful words.
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