Shuffling Slowly

The snow turned into freezing rain
So walking wasn’t easy.
We shuffled slowly; fear of falling
Made me slightly queasy.

As younger folk went traipsing by
I realized, on reflection,
That once-upon-a-time my body 
Needed no protection.

Yet, though in shape, I worry now
For aging bones may shatter
So caution reigns supreme as mind’s
Triumphant over matter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Fascinatng to me: Mind over matter meant that I went coatless during my youth = Bravado. Now mind over matter = coat = caution…. As the world turns. Thanks, Ilene! :) gw
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December 2, 2019 at 4:58 PM
One of my happiest memories as a child was running across the snow when my irate father was too big and heavy to catch me, and least was clinging like a spider to shop walls in Chamonix, trying remain in an upright position on the ice. You got that right; old bones just chatter and shatter! Aloha! Rico
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December 1, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Be careful on the ice
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