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Shuffling Slowly

The snow turned into freezing rain So walking wasn’t easy. We shuffled slowly; fear of falling Made me slightly queasy. As younger folk went traipsing by I realized, on reflection, That once-upon-a-time my body Needed no protection. Yet, though in shape, I worry now For aging bones may shatter So caution reigns supreme as mind’s Triumphant over matter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/2/2019 7:47:00 PM
Fascinatng to me: Mind over matter meant that I went coatless during my youth = Bravado. Now mind over matter = coat = caution…. As the world turns. Thanks, Ilene! :) gw
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Date: 12/2/2019 4:58:00 PM
One of my happiest memories as a child was running across the snow when my irate father was too big and heavy to catch me, and least was clinging like a spider to shop walls in Chamonix, trying remain in an upright position on the ice. You got that right; old bones just chatter and shatter! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/1/2019 5:26:00 PM
Be careful on the ice
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