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Heaven is both above and below our feet, so vividly recall that ground likes feeling your knees and breeze likes spinning your hair. By Poet
cogitates on rousing heaves my treasure glorious sunrise becomes murky to pink as the sun sets the sky turns gold my brooding nearness to daisies and cellos a rainbow arched across far wing amid rain and sun overcast gloomy and sluggish the gist of the nature mesmerism detected illusions covered quietly blooms of the wilderness in the woods cognitive murkiness that dims fanciful notion my treasure.
Written: March 6, 2022 1st Place contest winner Form I - Imagism - New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/19/2022 8:15:00 AM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest with your beautiful poem full of lovely imagery, I love your image and quote also ~Constance
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Date: 3/19/2022 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Your placement is highly appreciated and it fills me with pride and honor.

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