Shroud of Lace

To watch them pass on by
So pensive, grave, with winter in the lace
That shrouds each year that time cannot deny
A springtime switched to autumn graces
Has furrowed in their seasoned faces 
And covers gray of silken hair
While all the world strolls by in haste
With a sense of reverence in the air

She lifts her languid eye
A wrinkled brow portrayed
Where lines of time and experience lie
Where every movement displays
The falling leaves of yesterday
Before the tears of sweet despair
Were spread upon the April day
With a sense of reverence in the air

Composed they stroll, arm in arm, thigh to thigh
Some say their worth has spent its day
She holds her self in calm reply
His world once used him by swift pace
Wisdom disregards the youthful chase
They walk to buy some flowers fair
Their youth is put to rest today
With a sense of reverence in the air

No tear should trickle from your eyes
No need to mourn for yesteryear
For sagely knowing what never dies
With sense of reverence in the air




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Inspired by Catie's contest Ballade Boomba
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Hard form a good go at it! Black Out was 1 part real & Mat's girl's dream...that's why it's so impacting I lived it [nod] Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 9:03 AM
such smooth float of rich impressions of a season, carrie... superb write with winning wishes to you.. SOUP MAIL.. :) huggs, nette
Poet Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:41 AM
It is still ringing in my ear like a soothing melody!WONDERFUL!!---kashinath
Marymkilker Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Your poem is very nice and light reading a delight
Mannan Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:34 PM
Such a beautiful ballade and so sagely written.
Peranteau Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:51 PM
So poetic dear poet ! I loved every thought ! Great write Carrie ! much love, james
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:10 PM
Looks like a good entry for Catie's contest. In your seventeenth line, "comely" should be "calmly".
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