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Shriveled and Sore

Freezing my peeper off, almost fell on the floor Caught it in time before it rolled out the door Was trying to escape Says it's abused outta shape Used to be lengthy, now shriveled and short

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/14/2017 11:08:00 AM

Giggles! Believe it or not I know a thing or two about freezing tender bits ;) frost bit my nip one 50 below wind chilled day xomo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/14/2017 2:55:00 PM

Mid 90's cold snap, -50 windchill, on a bike, wind tunnel at Gearge and Sussex... My bag at the time held my radio strapped to my chest squishing my coat's insulation... Yes that! Broke blood vessels :o

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2017 2:22:00 PM

Could you describe where that nip part is??? LOL Growing up in Montreal, the lowest I remember was 30 below... freaking cold that was!!! Of course we bundled up for it... couldn't actually walk though!!! Great pic! xxx

Judith S
Date: 12/14/2017 1:42:00 PM

Maureen ... do you live at the North Pole ???? ;)

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2017 10:39:00 AM

I think 4 naked ladies holding you tight would make you over heat!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2017 12:11:00 PM

And drooooooooooooooolllllllllll!

Judith S

Date: 12/14/2017 9:52:00 AM

Oh my gosh Jack!!! You do make me laugh!! :0

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2017 12:14:00 PM

Keep on a-giggling, it's good for the soul! And this be da place!!! Lovesies dear Judith S.!!! xxx

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2017 9:37:00 AM

Time to put the heating on my friend.. hope you have your thermals on...

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2017 10:30:00 AM

How's about 3 or 4 naked ladies... what about that eh??? No need for thermals... a fan maybe!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/14/2017 8:56:00 AM

Come on down to the land of sun!//Your mini-specimen will think it's fun//let it hang out//I hope to shout//Might be crisp when said and done. GOOD MORNING JACKSON OF THE FROZEN NORTH!!! (internet is working... so far)

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2017 10:28:00 AM

Wish that was possible... would be there in a flash!!! Fingers crossed for the internst connection! GOOD MORNING YOU LUCKY DUDE!!!