Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Shriveled and Sore

Freezing my peeper off, almost fell on the floor
Caught it in time before it rolled out the door
Was trying to escape
Says it's abused outta shape
Used to be lengthy, now shriveled and short

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 14, 2017 at 11:08 AM Giggles! Believe it or not I know a thing or two about freezing tender bits ;) frost bit my nip one 50 below wind chilled day xomo! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 14, 2017 at 2:55 PM Mid 90's cold snap, -50 windchill, on a bike, wind tunnel at Gearge and Sussex... My bag at the time held my radio strapped to my chest squishing my coat's insulation... Yes that! Broke blood vessels :o Jack Ellison December 14, 2017 at 2:22 PM Could you describe where that nip part is??? LOL Growing up in Montreal, the lowest I remember was 30 below... freaking cold that was!!! Of course we bundled up for it... couldn't actually walk though!!! Great pic! xxx Judith S December 14, 2017 at 1:42 PM Maureen ... do you live at the North Pole ???? ;)

Silent One December 14, 2017 at 10:39 AM I think 4 naked ladies holding you tight would make you over heat!!! Jack Ellison December 14, 2017 at 12:11 PM And drooooooooooooooolllllllllll!

Judith S December 14, 2017 at 9:52 AM Oh my gosh Jack!!! You do make me laugh!! :0 Jack Ellison December 14, 2017 at 12:14 PM Keep on a-giggling, it's good for the soul! And this be da place!!! Lovesies dear Judith S.!!! xxx

Silent One December 14, 2017 at 9:37 AM Time to put the heating on my friend.. hope you have your thermals on... Jack Ellison December 14, 2017 at 10:30 AM How's about 3 or 4 naked ladies... what about that eh??? No need for thermals... a fan maybe!!!

Lim'Rik Flats December 14, 2017 at 8:56 AM Come on down to the land of sun!//Your mini-specimen will think it's fun//let it hang out//I hope to shout//Might be crisp when said and done. GOOD MORNING JACKSON OF THE FROZEN NORTH!!! (internet is working... so far) Jack Ellison December 14, 2017 at 10:28 AM Wish that was possible... would be there in a flash!!! Fingers crossed for the internst connection! GOOD MORNING YOU LUCKY DUDE!!!