Showing His Stuff

The fool on the hill passed the test
Proved he was dumber than the rest
He purchased a fine auto
Crashed it into a grotto
And said he’d only done his best.

So, if once was not bad enough
He wanted to show himself tough
He purchased an old roadster
From a dumber old jokester,
And he attempted to show his stuff.

The roadster wound up in a creek
Still the fool, anything but meek,
Bought a nifty old Ford truck,
Wrecked it in a muddy muck
Understand the fool's mind was weak!

HONORABLE MENTION
Written February 25, 2022
Especially for “Tall Tales 1” Poetry Contest
8-8-7-7-8 syllables each, checked with PS
Sponsored by Jeff Kyser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 12:56 AM
Interesting and free flowing tale. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 8:25 AM
I'm glad you found my limericks interesting, Chris.
Kyser Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Congrats on your honorable mention in the contest!
Hankins Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Jeff, for the honorable mention. I appreciated the notice. I can occasionally write a fair limerick, but they are not a strong point with me. Again, thanks!
Y. Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Wow! Milt, This is a good take on the contest theme. I wrote one for the contest but I haven't posted it, I'm not sure if works or not. I think you got a winner on your hands. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
Hankins Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Oh, I don't know. I hope so. It was stort of a difficult one for me to write. I'm not really good with the rhythm of limericks. Best wishes on yours. Thanks for the read and your thoughts.
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