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"showering For Two"

The water sprinkles from our shoulders to our feet... Your mouth open as your tongue and lips hold your teeth... Our eyes blurred by the steam and the passion behind this glass door... It all started softly with a kiss and a hug as our towels dropped to the floor...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/8/2010 11:02:00 PM
oh my this made blush very erotic... thanx for your comment it made blush too lol
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Date: 11/8/2010 1:33:00 PM
Dreamy and down right steamy Michael. Capturing Couplet >> James :)
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Date: 11/8/2010 6:05:00 AM
Well Michael I tend to be like lightening.. catch me if u can kinda girl.. Ron keeps in shape that way..hahahahahaha... u and lady fair have a wonderful day ...and night... together enjoying each other ... luv.. thinking of u ...
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Date: 11/8/2010 6:02:00 AM
Sexy, steamy, sultry, seductive, sassy, soft, showering for two sounds like such fun.. Ron and I do agree.. I made him read this lovely write ..my friend.. as u have 'pumped up' the volume in this home this morning with this creation.. J.G. on a break..luv..
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Date: 11/6/2010 4:36:00 AM
Sweet, Michael. Nicely written Couplet.
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Date: 11/5/2010 10:36:00 PM
The master at work again. Love your sensual couplets Mr. F ;) oh and I dont think he does, I think a move along is on the cards lol.. Thanks for your thoughts as always, love Wilma
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Date: 11/5/2010 9:42:00 PM
very sensual, love it
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Date: 11/5/2010 6:33:00 PM
soup mail
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Date: 11/5/2010 5:53:00 PM
Sensuous
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Date: 11/5/2010 5:17:00 PM
What a passionate picture you have created, Michael
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Date: 11/5/2010 4:13:00 PM
Way to go..Sara
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