"showering For Two"

The water sprinkles from our shoulders 
to our feet...
Your mouth open as your tongue and lips
hold your teeth...

Our eyes blurred by the steam and the
passion behind this glass door...
It all started softly with a kiss and a hug
as our towels dropped to the floor...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jennings Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 11:02 PM
oh my this made blush very erotic... thanx for your comment it made blush too lol
Fraser Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 1:33 PM
Dreamy and down right steamy Michael. Capturing Couplet >> James :)
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Well Michael I tend to be like lightening.. catch me if u can kinda girl.. Ron keeps in shape that way..hahahahahaha... u and lady fair have a wonderful day ...and night... together enjoying each other ... luv.. thinking of u ...
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Sexy, steamy, sultry, seductive, sassy, soft, showering for two sounds like such fun.. Ron and I do agree.. I made him read this lovely write ..my friend.. as u have 'pumped up' the volume in this home this morning with this creation.. J.G. on a break..luv..
Hilliker Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 4:36 AM
Sweet, Michael. Nicely written Couplet.
Neels Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 10:36 PM
The master at work again. Love your sensual couplets Mr. F ;) oh and I dont think he does, I think a move along is on the cards lol.. Thanks for your thoughts as always, love Wilma
Roberts Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 9:42 PM
very sensual, love it
Scripca Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 6:33 PM
soup mail
Brown Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 5:53 PM
Sensuous
Mehta Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 5:17 PM
What a passionate picture you have created, Michael
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Way to go..Sara
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