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Showered In Victory

I hope to be forgiven- for I was not myself but I have surmounted; exceedingly healed from the wounds my mind wears (a gift to myself) I faced hell head on, saw sights I wish were unseen, with chestnut eyes glaring into depth freeing myself from… the ache of craving redemption I outpaced my foes- speed knows no bounds when it comes to regret; transcending into pebbled tides I am at ease, lost at shore no more I’m sorry worry not about me and accept my apology- a mistake made, forgiven through empathy, and showered in victory August 4, 2019 Chantelle Anne Cooke Overcoming Mistakes Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/13/2019 2:28:00 PM
A nice read and full of depth. Congrats on your podium win
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Date: 9/12/2019 6:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your lovely poem ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:24:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed reading and wanted to congratulate you on your win. God bless you
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:22:00 AM
"I faced hell head on, saw sights I wish were unseen, with chestnut eyes glaring into depth freeing myself from… the ache of craving redemption" WOW! WOW! WOW!
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Date: 9/4/2019 2:41:00 PM
Very nice, Luloo! An introspective look.
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Date: 9/5/2019 7:04:00 AM
thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo

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