Showered In Victory

I hope to be forgiven-
for I was not myself

but

I have surmounted;
exceedingly healed 
from the wounds
my mind wears
         (a gift to myself)

I faced hell head on,
saw sights I wish
were unseen,
with chestnut eyes
glaring into depth
freeing myself from…
           the ache of craving
           redemption

I outpaced my foes-
speed knows no 
bounds when it 
comes to regret;
transcending into
pebbled tides I am
at ease,
lost at shore no more

I’m sorry

worry not about me
and
accept my apology-
a mistake made,
forgiven through
empathy, 
and 
showered in victory




August 4, 2019
Chantelle Anne Cooke
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/13/2019 2:28:00 PM
A nice read and full of depth. Congrats on your podium win
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Date: 9/12/2019 6:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your lovely poem ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:24:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed reading and wanted to congratulate you on your win. God bless you
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:22:00 AM
"I faced hell head on, saw sights I wish were unseen, with chestnut eyes glaring into depth freeing myself from… the ache of craving redemption" WOW! WOW! WOW!
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Date: 9/4/2019 2:41:00 PM
Very nice, Luloo! An introspective look.
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Date: 9/5/2019 7:04:00 AM
thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo
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