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Naani 4 lines 20-25 syllables

Shower Shoes-Naani

shower shoes sloshing, soapy, slippery,
and teeming with colossal cleanliness,
                                        toweled,
                                culpable

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Paige Hind

January 31, 2024 at 1:59 PM

Ah, wow. Unique perspective.

Kim Rodrigues

January 31, 2024 at 5:56 PM

Thank you! :)

Bill Baker

January 27, 2024 at 9:35 PM

Nice alliteration is this one, Kim. Intriguing form of poetry. Good luck if a contest entry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2024 at 4:21 AM

Thank you, Billa!

Gershon Wolf

January 27, 2024 at 8:33 PM

Guilty as charged Guilty as charged, those shower shoes. ~ Mr. Mindfulness

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2024 at 4:22 AM

Thanks for catching the nuance of the poem ;)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 27, 2024 at 2:16 PM

Love the alliteration. This is nicely written, Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues

January 27, 2024 at 3:16 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Silent One

January 27, 2024 at 6:33 AM

IS this a new form? Looks interesting..

Kim Rodrigues

January 27, 2024 at 9:55 AM

Sent you Soup Mail.

Christuraj Alex

January 26, 2024 at 10:18 PM

It's, indeed a tongue-twister and an example of mastery over perfect alliteration.

Kim Rodrigues

January 27, 2024 at 9:50 AM

Thank you so much, my friend!

Brandy Nicole

January 26, 2024 at 7:50 PM

' shower shoes sloshing, soapy, slippery. ' Oh, my ! This could be a tongue twister. :) Your thoughts bring a smile, Kim. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

January 27, 2024 at 9:48 AM

Thanks, Brandy!