Shower

Cap not for thinking;
protects my head from wet thought,
that rolls down my face,
and breaches my back; relaxed.
Like tiny hands of wanted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Allen Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 10:00 AM
I dig this!
Palli Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 12:35 AM
I like that. thanks
Owens Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 11:08 PM
Very nice Tanka...enjoyed...Marty
Esquire Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 11:04 PM
Dear Jessica, i see YOU are well versed in the Forms of POETRY Excellent Tanka "Like tiny hands of wanted" Vivid Imagery I am glad to meet YOU Superb Write Keep the Talent Flow- ing YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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