Show Me the Way

Well it is like this you see,
I’m against odds they say,
It is in stone or it is in clay.
I fly away to set it all free.

Time does not exist to me.
Money has no cost to pay.
Love is a game folk’s play.
Life is a gift do you agree?

Shooting Stars always fall,
I wish I wish all of it for you.
Wishing on a Star l did call.
I wish blue skies just for you.

But time told this and time told that.
Show me the way with no tit for tat.

®Registered: Ann Rich 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/1/2010 9:30:00 AM
Interesting Sonnet that you have presented here in this one. The last stanza the starts "Shooting Stars" I especially like. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/1/2010 9:12:00 AM
Hi Ann, Forgiveness is the way you seek.... once learned.. no one can hurt you anymore. Thank you for sharing your words. Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/1/2010 6:10:00 AM
A nice and lovely poem to read. Thanks for your comments on my Poem My dream Love. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:45:00 AM
cute poem, enjoyed reading today
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Date: 1/29/2010 8:18:00 PM
A cute style you have with poetry! LUv, Andrea
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