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Should'A Read the Fine Print


when I met him I was dizzy with love
swept off my feet in a cloud of pure lust
I had butterflies in my tummy
totally discombobulated
I think he used some hocus-pocus on me
oh I abandoned all self control for this man
those deep brown eyes had me drowning
his sublime deep voice was captivating
it was hopeless to fight
I really should'a read the fine print
he whispered sultry sweet things in my ear
he caressed my hair
and I told him I loved him hopelessly
and I am pretty sure he felt the same
because he soon asked me to marry him
I do-  we both said
we promised to love each other forever
till death do us part
well I really should'a read the fine print
because forever was only a few years
it seems God had another set of directions
and our love was to be erstwhile and fleeting
it was written in the book of life
and it was sudden and sorrowful
then he was gone
only a name engraved in stone cold to be
now I am left in a labyrinth twisting and turning
my forever is a forever grief
I really should'a read the fine print
but would it have made a difference
could I have turned away from my love
even if I knew the ending
in that fine print that needed a magnifying glass
to read- no 
would have loved him anyways
I carry red roses to his tomb
under an infinite motionless blue sky above
I walk a path that winds like a river
in dreams I hold him to my heart
and weep for what was in the fine print

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April 12, 2016

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For the contest, I Really Should'a Read The Fine Print,
sponsor, John Lawless

First Place
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May 1, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your win... Linda
Daniel Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win:) A sad but deep write, love the lines - "I really should'a read the fine print but would it have made a difference"
La France Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Jo thanks for the congratulations and the awesome, no it would not have made any difference, the heart knows what the heart knows ~~
Murray Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Beautiful sad tale of love lost.
La France Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Jean, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~~
Haight Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Again, your words gave me goosebumps, Broken Wings...so emotional, and knowing it is true makes it even more so. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:26 PM
Sandra, thanks for the nice comment, the congratulations and the 7 ~
Chansarkar Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations, this one is superb!Loving it!
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Sara, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment !!
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Dropping back with my congrats on your top spot Constance:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Jan, thank you so much for the congrats and hugs xxxx
Smith Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations B/W, another excellent win...
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Charlie thanks for the congratulations and the excellent !!
Dalei Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 6:21 AM
Hi BW, Congratulations on ur 1st placement win. A meaningful write. Enjoyed............hugs
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:02 AM
MD, thanks for the congrats and the compliment and hugs !!!
Davey Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Congratulations on your top placement, another beautiful piece of poetry. 7++
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Brian, thank you for the congrats and the beautiful and the 7++, appreciate so much
Misra Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Congrats, Broken. Excellent write and very, very deserved win. Congratulations. (I was in fact going to write on a similar theme - the euphoric "I do" followed by the realities of married life).
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Karam, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !!
Lawless Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 8:42 PM
BW, the contest is judged...I had a little confusion or a glitch with the new system. I like the twist at the end of this poem, a true lover's poem. Happy with the experience regardless of the "fine print". Thanks for participating in the contest.
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:05 AM
John, the contest theme was inspirational and I took it and flew, thanks so much for that awesome win, I am over the moon, yes I did notice the glitch, happy it all worked out...
Scars Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 1:46 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your top win! Well deserved! :)-luloo
La France Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Laura, thanks so much for the congrats !!
La France Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Laura, thanks but I cannot see that this contest is judged... unless I am just not seeing it...
Nance Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Heartbreaking and touching. Well said.
La France Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Casarah, thanks so much for visiting and the comment, appreciate !
Turner Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Well done Constance. Enjoyed the bittersweet write. Good luck. Peace young lady:)
La France Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Daniel, thanks for visiting and for the compliment !
Allison Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 4:02 AM
Beautifully penned with your trademark melancholy style - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
La France Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Jan, thanks for reading my poem, well you know me, if I can make it sad, I will !
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