Should You Leave Me

For Timothy Lee, the best of me
You are the curve starting my smile, the infectiousness in my laughter, the glint in my fulfilled eyes and the wonder that turns me little girl-shy. You gather my womanly answer prior to mastering its exquisite shatter. Your voice is my ears favorite gift, able to lift my steps to walk full depth. Just as I crave cuddling your insight, I love to linger in all that you perplex. You are my match, my complete, my excitement and my wonderful ease. All of my days and each of my nights feel the assist of both sun and moon, but they underwhelm compared to you who kiss them just as I wish them. Now there are words in your blue eyes that I cannot read or describe. I am desperate to be freed; guaranteed that I am still your need. Should you take your love from me, you would leave behind a dark empty. Nothing in the world would make sense –all would lose context and content. I would be an empty shell lost in bogs of hell with no relief to press against. I would not emerge with a defense or disperse a functioning pretense. My heart would naught but beat hurting blood where ache is caught and fear pumps greed for relief that my heart’s death be complete.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. Beautiful poem of love. Well done!
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win and well crafted write . Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Amazing write Cay Cay, congrats on a fine win!
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your podium finish, CayCay.
Haight Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:43 PM
A beautiful, heartfelt poem, CayCay. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 8:45 AM
This is such a well deserved win, my dear friend. I'm happy for you. Congratulations.
Gondolf Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:33 AM
Back to say congrats, CayCay, well done. John
Krutsinger Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:16 AM
You are my match, my complete, my excitement and my wonderful ease. That is outstanding writing, CayCay. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!
Gentry Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win with this beautifully written outpouring of love and devotion. Well done.
Breedt Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 5:56 AM
Love must look like that. Reminiscent of " If you go away" ( ne me quit te pas) it evokes such deep passion in my heart.
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 9:25 PM
Caycay, this is simply outstanding work from you. I will not believe it if it does not make the winner list. I just had to see you as I went off here for the night. Time to get to those crappy dirty dishes in my sink!! Toodles. FAVED poem
Anish Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Fine Romantic free verse here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Godwin Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:36 AM
I don't think we've crossed paths before, so hey to you, Matthew Anish. I appreciate your comment - I'm happy to have you on my page. All the best ... CayCay
Krampe Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Sounds wonderful, CayCay :)
Godwin Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 4:10 AM
Thank you, Agnes - Tim is my blessing for which I live consistently grateful so he is not allowed to ever leave! I'm being a silly me this morning. Good to see you, and all the best ... CayCay
Gondolf Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 5:45 PM
All the best to you and Tim, my friend. John
Godwin Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Thank you, John - all is best, best, better. You take care and I'll visit your 'latest' works soon. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Onclaud Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 4:05 PM
cay,wow, profound expression of ardor... i feel this is soul mate bonding unless mercury retrograde negates my instincts... huggs
Godwin Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Your instincts are solid, and so are we. Glad the ardor came thru Nette, and also to have all of your comments. I haven't been a good 'reader/commenter' as of late, so please bear with me - I will come see you! Poetry hugs ... Cay
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