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Should We Die This Night

Our hearts agree, if we should meet death this night, then death shall find, we do not heed its sense of doom. A thousand times we would gladly die without fright just to taste once more the nectar of our love’s bloom. There is but one shared, final thing we need now know, just one more promise, one more love vow to be made before imminent death does finality bestow; our mutual pledge said with sought prayerful aid that as soulmates, our two spirits remain love bound. We can handle death rendering our bodies mushed, but swear our shared agony shall bear piercing sound in galaxies echo if our joining is crushed. We believe our hearts paired in eternities care, that surely such is mightier than death’s lit fuse. Our confidence asserts our love outweighs despair and our soul-link shall survive all doom may issue. With our oath now sealed, we lay skin to skin entwined. Our passionate kiss, laced with tears of sweetheart taste, does emphasize our love’s want of life for all time and belief that looming doom cannot our love waste. ... CayCay Jennings February 15, 2018

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Date: 3/18/2018 5:43:00 AM
Touched me way down deep. Validated that i have a soul.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/20/2018 7:37:00 AM
Hey, I remember reading you - glad you visited - it served to remind me. I liked this one, but apparently the 'judge' of the contest did not, contest are pure perspective so if you ever participate know that anyone can hold a contest. Glad to have you here ... CayCay
Date: 2/15/2018 11:24:00 PM
Awww...how beautiful, CayCay. Tis true, I want some real hard core lovin my last two minutes!
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Date: 2/15/2018 10:22:00 PM
Marvelous poem, CayCay. Lovely.
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Date: 2/15/2018 7:37:00 PM
Oh my you took the theme and wove it into such a beautiful love poem, Caycay. You are truly inspired, I believe , by your wonderful soul mate. I can't wait to get more news from you in my email account. And to find out how you are doing after all the ruckus!! Thanks for seeing so many of my poems. Let me see if I have seen your poems from the past several days or not.
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Date: 2/15/2018 2:58:00 PM
This sensual, but also a deep poem with many very good lines... Dying in the arms of the beloved is a beautiful thing..
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Date: 2/15/2018 11:19:00 AM
Such a touching poem cay cay. .. heaven for bid it should happen but I'd definitely want to be with the one I love:-) hugs Jan xx
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