Should I Just Go On Then

Should I just go on then?

I’m still here
still waiting on you
still trying to find out
what you want to do

I’m still here
tapping my toes
pointing at my watch
aiming significant looks
in your direction

are you ready yet?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Harris Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 1:21 PM
So realistic, sounds just like my wife.lol
Lehman Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:43 PM
And my hubby! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Applause! The action is all in one direction as the other seems to notice nothing. 7+
Lehman Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Thank you, Kim!
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