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Should I Go, Should I Stay

My sinful life Clench Full of baggage But there's light

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/7/2015 9:17:00 AM

Baby, did you mean 'baggage?' The meaning is right there, clear and well expressed if it is baggage. What comes to mind is baggage is a human creation, with true faith, not easy, but true faith, we lose all baggage, it is gone, handed over and surrendered to God ... to me, that is the light your poem speaks of ... CayCay

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/16/2015 4:31:00 AM

Lol i meant Urban

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/16/2015 4:30:00 AM

Hahaha am laughing at myself now. How did i miss that tiny error? I need to stay away from that Uban dictionary, lol. Thank You a zillion times CayCay