Should I Go, Should I Stay

My sinful life Clench Full of baggage But there's light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Godwin Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Baby, did you mean 'baggage?' The meaning is right there, clear and well expressed if it is baggage. What comes to mind is baggage is a human creation, with true faith, not easy, but true faith, we lose all baggage, it is gone, handed over and surrendered to God ... to me, that is the light your poem speaks of ... CayCay
Hunjeri Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 4:31 AM
Lol i meant Urban
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October 16, 2015 at 4:30 AM
Hahaha am laughing at myself now. How did i miss that tiny error? I need to stay away from that Uban dictionary, lol. Thank You a zillion times CayCay
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